There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heared everywhere nowadays?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Since time immemorial, humans always try to express their ideas, emotions as well as attitude’s to the different situations through music. It is undeniable that music has become an essential part of our life. However, there is no absolute agreement on what kind of music, local or international, is more important. Whilst I believe that there are strong arguments on both sides, I would suggest that for persons the folk music pays more important role in their lives.
Let’s begin by looking at reasons why people prefer to listen different songs. As a commonly held belief is that music has a significant impact on human’s mood. For instance, after listening his favorite song a person, who has a tough day begins to feel himself better. Another advantage of listening music is that different sounds in an appropriate order help people to concentrate on their work and increase productivity.
Another issue is what type of music is more appropriate to the person. I completely agree with the people who claim that traditional music is more preferable than international. Despite the fact that international songs could be heard in various countries, the local music shows dreams, hopes, or even problems of exactly country. Such music is an essential part of its nation’s history. Therefore, the county will choose a wrong way of cultural development, if its citizens prefer to forget their roots and listen only international songs.
In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account I would argue that music is one of the main parts of our everyday life. However, only a traditional music has an important meaning to the people because only this type of music could fully transfer the history of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17314487633 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90859731118 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597173144876 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7375491437 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331486770165 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119453984219 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566627957326 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211919534007 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397260150231 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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