For a successful company, selling products depends more on company's reputation or it depends more on if they provide discount and free offers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, offering discount has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether selling products depends on company’s reputation or providing free offer?”. It is a widely held view that presenting goods at a lower price is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that considering discount plays a vital role in the world of cut-throat competition. To put into consideration, I express several reasons why I support this idea. First and foremost is that short-term discount makes the companies promote their venues to raise the productions. Secondly, it can be argued that discount provides potential buyers with appropriate circumstances to purchase their basic needs with reasonable price. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that not only the companies increase their capacity income, they are able to achieve popularity among consumers. A very tangible example to illustrate would be China that presents an extensive range of merchandise at a lower price all over the world.
However, there is no doubt that free offering provides people with various negative points. It should be taken into account that the majority of these goods are flashy and without any quality, so customers are convinced to buy the product without knowing them. Moreover, it is quite clear that a large amount of money is spent to advertise and the announcement of discount by the companies.For instance, reputable companies in America present the brand products without any discount.
To recapitulate, I entirely agree that an appropriate method must be taken into consideration to offer a discount for products. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, for instance, in addition, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1207.87684729 138% => OK
No of words: 311.0 242.827586207 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36012861736 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03628589914 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 139.433497537 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630225080386 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 379.143842365 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8186148334 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.230769231 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184397114185 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566008664068 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681375687729 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107501566259 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532312095286 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 55.0591133005 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.5 Out of 90
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