Students today can easily access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary. Do you agree or disagree?
In the past few years , thanks to the incredible development of advanced technology , students nowadays have an easy accessto an enormous amount of infomation online . Everything can be searched on the internet , which is the main reason why the number of people going to the library is on the decrease . Even though I agree that online resources of information have advantages over traditional libraries , but it doesn't mean that we don't need libraries anymore . It is thus understandable why I completely disagree with this opinion .
The arguement in favour of searching information online would be that it is much more easier for everybody to find information , from students to business , since they can search for it whenever and wherever they want as a result of the mobility of the Internet . However , I believe that traditional libraries still have special features that online resources will never have . Firstly , libraries provide students a quiet space yo read and learn , which is regarded as one of the most important benefits for students . At other places like office , home , park or even classrooms , people usually be distracted by many things like noise, food , people , ... , but if you are in the library , there will be no distraction . At this place , no one and nothing can bother you , which increase your ability of focusing and then countributes to a better result .
Besides , most of the information written in books is really trustworthy . While online resouces of information are full of information that have never been verified carefully , books have been considered as one of the most essential educational tools with many reliable and useful information for centuries . This is a really remarkable issue since it directly affect your result .
These foregoing points have brought me to the conclusion that although searching information online is much more convenient , traditional libraries still play an important role in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, really, so, still, then, thus, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26045016077 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91991258756 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56270096463 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.350672836 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.857142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187573222671 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683586679775 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486452557003 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106436118697 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457121558139 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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