Independent essay
Events happened in the past is one of the main factor responsible for existence of human beings on the earth.
Advancement in science and technology allows us to have knowledge of past. Although some people think that
studying about ancient time is useless, but in my opinion it is exceptionally important for different fields, for the following reasons:
Economically, we live in ever changing world, it is necessary to know about important discovery.
about contribution. To create latest complex machinery principle of resistance and and conductivity acts as pillar;
which were formulated in ancient times. So, it is compulsory for electronic engineers to knows
pins and bolts of old formulae and concepts to derive appropriate methods. However, astronomers are keen in gathering information about the past to know process how earth came into existence. They have collected data from the research done to understand big band theory is the model which explains the phenomenon of expansion of universe from high density and
high temprature states stand changes happened when earth's atmosphere was created.
So old studies teaches the evolution of earth.
Academically, when we analyse our formal education system; history is mandatory subject
in schools everywhere. Students are required to learn ancient civilization life style, eating habits
and their art work, in orer to develop critical thinking. Thus, history acts as gateway for many people
who are curious in joinig archeology field and research. Similarly, phenomenon of Global warming was predicted by scientists several years back that happened due to mutiple reasons such as destruction of ozone layer,
adding pollution to the atmosphere. By knowing this, preventive techniques are incorporated such as equipped machine in vehicles to reduce smoke, modified design of air conditoners and refergerator to reduce assimilation of free radicles in the atmosphere. As a result, pure atmosphere is considerably reducing the rate of lung cancer that caused by inhaling harmful gases.
In summarising, it is worth saying that we cant imagine our life without historical backgorund. Learning about past provide tremendous positive outcomes and sets a stage for the success. No sphere of human life can be flourished with ignorance. Therefore, there is stringent need to emphaize study of past for students irrespective of field.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...of past. Although some people think that studying about ancient time is useless, ...
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...ry to know about important discovery. about contribution. To create latest complex ...
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Suggestion: create the latest
...ant discovery. about contribution. To create latest complex machinery principle of resistan...
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...mplex machinery principle of resistance and and conductivity acts as pillar; which wer...
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...ulsory for electronic engineers to knows pins and bolts of old formulae and conce...
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...ansion of universe from high density and high temprature states stand changes hap...
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...ion system; history is mandatory subject in schools everywhere. Students are requ...
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... history acts as gateway for many people who are curious in joinig archeology fie...
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...that caused by inhaling harmful gases. In summarising, it is worth saying that ...
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...summarising, it is worth saying that we cant imagine our life without historical bac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, similarly, so, therefore, thus, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2043.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55163043478 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97698992042 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654891304348 0.524837075471 125% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9319268515 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.53405017921 331% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 58.1214874552 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.1575268817 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 10.9000537634 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.01818996416 129% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 86.8835125448 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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