The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph provides information about the average levels of carbondioxide emitted per person in four European countries between the years 1967 and 2007.
Overall, it can be seen that while Co2 levels reduced in United kingdom over the forty years, these levels showed an upward trend in Italy and Portugal. Sweden showed an unstable pattern.
In the year 1967, United kingdom had the highest CO2 levels of over 10 metric tonnes. This number gradually declined over the next four decades to slightly more than eight metric tonnes in 2007, which was still the top most value in 2007. CO2 ...
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You got 1.0 out of 9 because
You got 1.0 out of 9 because of a wrong essay topic. We have changed it a correct one.
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Portugal which had the least amount fo CO2 released per person in 1967, maintained its last position throughout the years , although there was a gradual rise over the decades from 1 metric tonnes to more than 4 metric tonnes
Error: fo Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No serious flaws found.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 7 10
No. of Words: 206 200
No. of Characters: 937 1000
No. of Different Words: 113 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.788 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.549 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.149 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 67 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 35 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 8 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 29.429 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.173 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.286 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.487 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.776 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.145 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...me figure as that of Italy at that time.This fall in Swedens CO2 value further gradu...
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Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d its last position throughout the years , although there was a gradual rise over ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69268292683 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20428977052 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565853658537 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.0328489713 43.030603864 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 137.428571429 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2857142857 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0259288977224 0.215688989381 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0170136736233 0.103423049105 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416748190274 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0297739288408 0.15604864568 19% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515699574933 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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