In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes and computers. What do you think is the most important of them? Why? Greatest invention in the last 100 years, medicine, science or technology.
The fact of technology and its corresponding impact on people’s lifestyle has been long marked by controversy among critics who concern about the modern inventions. While some of them claim that this contemporary inventions have adverse effects on the living, I am inclined to believe that technology is a plus, and I will analyse the aspects of that in this essay.
To begin with, new technologies and science especially in medicine significantly enhance urban life. Today, thanks to the technology advancements and medicine promotion, life expectancy has experienced a great increase among developed nations which in turn, can prove that the medicine inventions is the greatest one in the last recent century. As it is obviously clear, the promotion of science and specifically medicine have countless positive effects on the urban life.
Moreover, computers development take center stage in developed societies. Computers have made possible every complicated process in just less than a second. Therefore, many science and technology advancement are depending on the computers. However, with the widespread use of computers and other virtual technology, nowadays, we are witnessing for some social disorders such as copy-cat crimes which are developing among juveniles. So computers technology are seemingly to be less important than medicine and science.
As a conclusion, I would like to reaffirm that, whereas there are a dozen of various arguments which can significantly have effect on people’ living, the advantages of medicine and science advancements far outweigh their drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun science seems to be countable; consider using: 'many sciences'.
Suggestion: many sciences
... in just less than a second. Therefore, many science and technology advancement are dependin...
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Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...many science and technology advancement are depending on the computers. However, with the wid...
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Line 5, column 436, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'computers'' or 'computer's'?
Suggestion: computers'; computer's
...hich are developing among juveniles. So computers technology are seemingly to be less imp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, whereas, while, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67355371901 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12924528934 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619834710744 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2812867376 50.4703680194 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.818181818 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119011288111 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455230953576 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310577236221 0.071462118173 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652894677435 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168773914457 0.0609392437508 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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