greatest invention - car or television
There had been many invention created over the last century such as the internet and the car. Among these invention, the internet is the most important invention. This essay will discuss why the internet is the most important invention.
Books used to the only option to get information or knowledge in the past time. With the invention of internet, now people able to search the needed information or gain knowledge from internet with a single of click. For example, Lily succeed to bake a cake with the recipe she found online. Hence, it is much easier now to get information or knowledge around the world rather than study the books.
The invention of internet is also bring people new form of communication. With internet, the relationship between people has now connected closer than ever. For example, Lily able to find her childhood best friend by searching her name online. Therefore, there is no doubt that internet has bring people together whether internationally or locally.
In a nutshell, this essay discussed internet not only enables people to get information and knowledge, but also enables people to connect with each other easier. In my opinion, I strongly agree that internet is most important invention in this century.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun invention seems to be countable; consider using: 'many inventions'.
Suggestion: many inventions
There had been many invention created over the last century such as t...
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Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this invention' or 'these inventions'?
Suggestion: this invention; these inventions
...such as the internet and the car. Among these invention, the internet is the most important inv...
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Line 2, column 70, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
... to get information or knowledge in the past time. With the invention of internet, now pe...
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Line 2, column 235, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Lily) must be used with a third-person verb: 'succeeds'.
Suggestion: succeeds
...th a single of click. For example, Lily succeed to bake a cake with the recipe she foun...
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Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
...oks. The invention of internet is also bring people new form of communication. With ...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
...re, there is no doubt that internet has bring people together whether internationally...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... important invention in this century.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, so, therefore, for example, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 205.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08780487805 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70653031856 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1714872631 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.2307692308 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7692307692 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0752490226029 0.242375264174 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332258577381 0.0925447433944 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560283834912 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0506153944579 0.151781067708 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232164460545 0.0609392437508 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 55.0591133005 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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