You are working for a company. Your computer is giving some problem and it is affecting your work. Write a letter to the manager in your letter.
Describe the problem
Explain how it is affecting your work
Write what you want him to do regarding it Jon
Dear Sir
I am employer at your company. I am writing this letter to inform you about some problem in computer and it is affecting in my work.
Today, when I come at office and go to my cabin, starts the computer but the computer have taken much time to start. Furthermore,the functions of computer are not working properly ,due to the virus, it affects my work. I am getting late for my daily work and my day work is not completed on time.
I would be very grateful if, you solve this problem so that I was doing work in proper time, there was no a big problem in computer if you are concerned with computer technician. So that problem is solved in some few hours.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully 17th febraury 2018
Raman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir I am employer at your compan...
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Line 6, column 129, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ve taken much time to start. Furthermore,the functions of computer are not working p...
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Line 6, column 180, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ons of computer are not working properly ,due to the virus, it affects my work. I ...
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Line 8, column 104, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...as doing work in proper time, there was no a big problem in computer if you are co...
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Line 8, column 180, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...are concerned with computer technician. So that problem is solved in some few hours. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 627.0 937.175257732 67% => OK
No of words: 140.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47857142857 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45384953716 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657142857143 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 189.0 290.88556701 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4921965692 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6666666667 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5555555556 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342888740187 0.216113520407 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134221224597 0.0766984524023 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795457745677 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181775600728 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110686527742 0.0580467560999 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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