Most people in what are known as the developed nations have homes full of gadgets and labor-saving devices, from vacuum cleaners and dishwashers to the latest in computer technology.
Some people claim that despite all these labor-saving devices, we seem to have less free time.
In your opinion, has technology improved the quality of life or made it more complicated? Support your arguments with reasons and/or examples from your own experience and observations.
An average household of the modern era has around six to ten gadgets in each room. The technology revolution has enabled automation of once tedious chores like washing dishes, cleaning the house or making your favorite cup of coffee. This essay will discuss how the introduction of the new gadgets improved the quality of our life.
The development in the field of electronics has now made it possible to do hard things with ease of just clicking a button. This not only provides more leisure time to family members but also allows them to spend quality time each other; thereby helps nurture relationships and become better parents. For example, latest retail shopping technologies allow us to do online grocery shopping from the convenience of our living room. This proves, without doubt, that advent of technology is a big boost for the happiness in our daily living.
Before the computer age, elderly people and those with disabilities were the most struggling with their daily activities. This was particularly true for those who had serious health issues. Now, with the introduction of technology-assisted living, they are having a much better life than earlier. It also makes clear that technology is a vital factor in improving quality of life.
This essay discussed how the modern gadgets make our life easier with their advanced benefits. Technology is surely helping people of all ages to experience a much fruitful life.
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- Parents have more influence on a child's development than school does. How far do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with examples from your own experience. 77
- Company Top level Authorities should or should not take employees suggestions or ideas to take any decisions. Discuss 77
- A common marketing strategy for big companies is to introduce various offers and discounts. However, these strategies may have impact on their reputation. What are some of the impacts? 85
- It is as important for school children to study music, art and sport as it is for them to become literate and numerate.' How far do you agree with this statement? 72
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 312, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the latest'.
Suggestion: , the latest
...s and become better parents. For example, latest retail shopping technologies allow us t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11914893617 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74156181015 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651063829787 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2180134111 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.5384615385 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30769230769 7.25397266985 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0667239502783 0.242375264174 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0249775442949 0.0925447433944 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283580229461 0.071462118173 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0442779659389 0.151781067708 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018196571586 0.0609392437508 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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