Restriction air travel is the only way to prevent air pollution.
Do you agree?
Air pollution has now become a major health hazard for all countries. While some people support that restricting air traffic is the only solution to curtail pollution of air, others maintain that other methods should be implemented to control air pollution.
The rapid growth of manufacturing and automobile industry was the major development of last twenty years. This trend has undoubtedly created more and more factories across the world, which has now become the major source of pollution of environment and air. Moreover, the number of cars and trucks on the streets have multiplied exponentially over past decade. However, studies show that number of airplanes used by global airline industry has not increased. So, even if tough restrictions are imposed on air travel, air pollution cannot be prevented by that measure.
Despite the impracticality of banning air travel, some people think that air pollution can be eliminated by grounding all the airplanes. What they don't understand is that the aeronautical fuel is one of the most efficient fuel in the world. Combustion of these fuels doesn't create any pollutants during air travel. Studies show that only one percent of air pollution is created by air traffic. As air travel is not a significant source of air pollution, it should not be restricted.
This essay discussed why restriction of air travel cannot prevent air pollution. In my opinion, airplanes are not a major source of air pollution and, therefore air traffic need not be restricted to keep the air clean.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... grounding all the airplanes. What they dont understand is that the aeronautical fue...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...in the world. Combustion of these fuels doesnt create any pollutants during air travel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19277108434 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84778320728 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566265060241 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4430427119 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3571428571 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.25397266985 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417488037708 0.242375264174 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175504577681 0.0925447433944 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145372660309 0.071462118173 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304842698014 0.151781067708 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919953939692 0.0609392437508 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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