Most modern families have both parents working and as a result children spend less and less time with their parents.
What is the reason for this?
What problems can this cause?
It is quite a common scenario now to have both husband and wife are employed and have hectic work schedules. This type of families eventually faces a problem, that parents and children fail to spend quality time together. This essay will discuss the reasons for both parents working and how it affects the well being of the families.
Today's economy puts tremendous pressure on common man which in turn make it a struggle for parents to make ends meet. Rising living expenses force both husband and wife to start earning. Eventually, this tends to cause problems in their kids because the time parents spend at home will become considerably less. Studies show that there is an increasing percentage of kids who show symptoms of depression from households where both parents are working.
Despite the financial reasons, one other reason for the rise in employment of both parents is the exponential rise in educational opportunities. During the last century, the avenues of education increased multifold providing improved access to quality education for many. This, in turn, gave many unemployed parents access to complete their formal studies and thereby got into the workforce.
While it is good for increased income, it is detrimental to the mental health of children. While it might be inevitable for both parents to go to work, it is clear that this will put a strain on their relationship with the kids. In my opinion, parents should try to strike a balance between work and family.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01612903226 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61970192758 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600806451613 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.1233764824 50.4703680194 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.6923076923 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 7.25397266985 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358862005074 0.242375264174 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118223917674 0.0925447433944 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864906097568 0.071462118173 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212339559714 0.151781067708 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733669005552 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.