IT IS USUALLY FOOLISH TO GET MARRIED BEFORE COMPLETING YOUR STUDIES. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE”
Recently, the phenomenon of getting married before finishing studies and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of an early spousal is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that studying of marriage before graduation can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, getting married before finishing studies can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that sharing ideas, as well as sharing responsibility, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered achieving maturity by an early marriage. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both a sense of well-being and fulfilling sexual needs apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of the strong support of couples, getting married before studies might increase the consequences of financial problems. Moreover, fundamental aspects of family management would relate to this reality that the demerits of lack of concentration on education pertain to arduous tasks. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of studies expenditure is correlated with an early marriage. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of lack of attention to children.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of getting married before studies outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of promoting self-confidence prove the significance of developing skills, but also pinpoint the responsibility of couples as the social implication.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68327402135 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24736167294 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619217081851 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4836340782 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.083333333 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122957414385 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443958347708 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523738678413 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770619394408 0.151781067708 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223960829997 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 11.5310837438 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 55.0591133005 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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