It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do your agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
There are many different ways like punishment to learn the children some right and wrong behaviors in their childhood, but I think parents and teachers should be allowing non-body punishments in some little cases.
The true reaction to children is playing the key role to building children self confidence in future, therefore adults should avoid to punishment children and just talking them how to have better action in different situations in that punishment must be the final step reaction to them because children must to learn the best thing by communication with others except their family and their teacher. Actually not only punishment could not help children but also have some negative aspect on children because harm their emotional health in some cases.
However, the punishment is not the principal action to growing up children, but in some cases parents are fain to punishment their kids. Some non-body punishment like avoiding children to some entertainment could be useful, such as when sibling have some skirmish with each other’s, parents cancel the weekend plans like going to the park or zoo, that happened can learn children how their incorrect behavior harm their entertainment at the weekend. In the other hands, teachers can some different punishment when faced some problems with their students like when students are not pay enough attentions to their lessons. Teachers could punishment students with giving them more homework, so students find that when they did not do their responsibility they have to some punishments.
Children should learn how to have responsibility to their activities and that future results. Although parents and teachers should be careful to doing some non-bodies punishment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 11, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
There are many different ways like punishment to learn the child...
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Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...le to building children self confidence in future, therefore adults should avoid to punis...
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Line 4, column 304, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
... step reaction to them because children must to learn the best thing by communication w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, therefore, i think, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40293040293 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71586958776 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498168498168 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.1621233936 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.888888889 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3333333333 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209953025296 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115858458044 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459109049127 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164201832488 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323118121932 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 9.78957915832 266% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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