Venture company and Startup have to work quickly and risk making mistakes because they should release their deliverables faster than their competitor. While some people believe in working promptly and do not afraid to make an error is vital in the job, I posit work carefully and make sure that everything is correct is the essential thing in the work.I'd like to elaborate my answer with three reasons.
To begin with, Everyone buys brand products even costly than non-brand products because they are reliable about their quality. It takes a long time to build trust, and it quickly loses if you make a mistake. Therefore, the company makes sure that everything is correct. For example, car manufacturers spend a lot of times for test if goods have a flaw, they will lose credibility, and everyone won't buy their car. Thus reliability is the important factor of products.
Furthermore, checking every step bring improvements. To make sure whether it is correct or incorrect is the inevitable process in progress.
To correct the mistake, you need to acquire accurate knowledge and skills. If you let the error remain error, you will make the same error until forever. Also, you can't even find the mistake if you work terribly. When I made the personal computer, I worked slowly and checked whether it is all correct. Thanks to that, I became to master well with it and to find out what was wrong immediately. Hence, polite work improves not only people skills but also the quality of deliverable.
Finally, mentally relax and time margin gives creativity to people. When chased by time, the margin of the mind disappears, and the work efficiency drops.
In one experiment, they measured the speed of solving the problem that raising a candle on a wall using a specific tool.
The group which was told that person who quickly solves the puzzle will win explained the problem later than the group which was told nothing. In short, To try to work quickly will lose creativity.
To summarize, I argue that to work slowly and to make sure that everything is correct will outweigh them, although work quickly and risk making mistakes bring some merits.
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, in short, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92328767123 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51850721437 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564383561644 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9780751136 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5714285714 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.380952381 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7619047619 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352150228239 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977346442004 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090226363029 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149964589883 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113938485805 0.0645574589148 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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