The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by naiommie on Fri, 04/06/2018 - 10:42

A glance at the graph provided reveals number of sales coffee and bananas on officially agreed fair price in five various European countries. Unit is measured by millions of euros.

One particularly interesting fact highlighted by the first table is that sales of coffee in every country rose, from 1999 to 2004. It is obvious, that Switzerland had the number of coffee sales twice as in UK in 1999. However, the amount of sales of coffee in UK skyrocketed to 20 millions while Switzerland was on the second place with 6 millions of sales. The least amount of sales in both years was in Sweden.

With regards to the second table, UK, Belgium, Sweden and Denmark have some striking similarities in the number of bananas' sales in 1999. While sales in Sweden and Denmark decreased at 1 millions and 0.9 milllions in 2004, respectively, sales in Belgium, UK, Switzerland rapidly increased at 4 millions, 5.5 millions and 47 millions in the same year, correspondingly.

To sum up, Switzerland had the most number of sales in both coffee and bananas in 1999.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: 6 million
...witzerland was on the second place with 6 millions of sales. The least amount of sales in bo...
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... of sales in both years was in Sweden. With regards to the second table, UK, Be...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...llions and 47 millions in the same year, correspondingly. To sum up, Switzerl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, so, while, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86740331492 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80571612569 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524861878453 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2172128834 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8888888889 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174532906207 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841924314126 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514993945664 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123721526985 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258335797311 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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