The following memo appeared in the newsletter of the West Meria Public Health Council.
"An innovative treatment has come to our attention that promises to significantly reduce absenteeism in our schools and workplaces. A study reports that in nearby East Meria, where consumption of the plant beneficia is very high, people visit the doctor only once or twice per year for the treatment of colds. Clearly, eating a substantial amount of beneficia can prevent colds. Since colds are the reason most frequently given for absences from school and work, we recommend the daily use of nutritional supplements derived from beneficia. We predict this will dramatically reduce absenteeism in our schools and workplaces."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The prediction that the daily use of nutritional supplements derived from plant beneficia will dramatically reduce absenteeism in the schools and workplaces in West Maria region is logically not convincing as it lacks certain answers to the questions arose due to inadequate assumptions.
First, the argument assumes that the residents of East Maria region only consumes plant beneficia and not any other additional supplement. What if residents of East Maria region consumes other supplements for their health? It is very much possible that residents of East Maria might have been consuming any other medications like Ayurvedic or any other chemical based pills which are not derived from plant beneficia. This Ayurvedic pills might have provided them immunity to fight against various virus and bacterial diseases.
Secondly, the questions might arise that, What if the people living in East Maria Region is getting home treatment? Technology has changed a lot in recent years. There is many online applications that can diagnose the the cold and can prescribe the required medication to cure it. There is possibility that the people of East Maria region might be falling ill as much as people of West Maria do but they are taking treatment at home. There is another possibility that they might have been using home remedies for the treatment this explains why there has been very few doctors appointment in the rolling year.
Third, the author here in the argument assumes that the people of West Maria would take nutritional supplements derived from plant beneficia daily with sincerity what if they just don't? The kids studying in the schools might have not been mature enough to take this nutritional supplements daily without fail. We just can't expect such kind of maturity from the people.
Thus the evidence provided for the prediction of the argument might not be enough. More enlightenment on the questions arose by the assumptions are needed to predict the result from the argument.
Ultimately, The arguments can be strengthened if author further adds the data of the residents of East Maria region like they are only consuming nutritional supplements that are only plant based, they are not getting home treatments from online applications and they are sincerely following the daily routine of taking this nutritional supplements which are derived from plant beneficia.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 383 350
No. of Characters: 1977 1500
No. of Different Words: 171 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.424 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.162 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.668 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 131 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 80 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 60 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.533 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.582 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.533 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.367 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.656 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.141 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The prediction that the daily use of nut...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...arose due to inadequate assumptions. First, the argument assumes that the res...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arious virus and bacterial diseases. Secondly, the questions might arise that...
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Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...y online applications that can diagnose the the cold and can prescribe the required med...
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Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...y online applications that can diagnose the the cold and can prescribe the required med...
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Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
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... but they are taking treatment at home. There is another possibility that they might ...
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...ors appointment in the rolling year. Third, the author here in the argument a...
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Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: don't
... daily with sincerity what if they just dont? The kids studying in the schools might...
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Line 7, column 321, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...supplements daily without fail. We just cant expect such kind of maturity from the p...
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...ch kind of maturity from the people. Thus the evidence provided for the predi...
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Line 9, column 3, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... kind of maturity from the people. Thus the evidence provided for the predictio...
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...redict the result from the argument. Ultimately, The arguments can be strengt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, then, third, thus, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 55.5748502994 72% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2017.0 2260.96107784 89% => OK
No of words: 382.0 441.139720559 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28010471204 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69922708729 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 204.123752495 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455497382199 0.468620217663 97% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 705.55239521 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.221225613 57.8364921388 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0625 119.503703932 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 23.324526521 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.70786347227 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0739051009723 0.218282227539 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278162084391 0.0743258471296 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287708265286 0.0701772020484 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0440640723928 0.128457276422 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290817402325 0.0628817314937 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.3799401198 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.3550499002 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.5979740519 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 98.500998004 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 12.3882235529 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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