"Manned space flight is costly and dangerous. Moreover, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men and women into space. Therefore, we should invest our resources in unmanned space flight."
While it maybe true that we ought to invest our resources in unmanned space flight, the author does not make a cogent argument leading to that conclusion.There are many conspicuous and subtle fallacious assumptions made by the author left unproved with the lack of substantial evidence.
Firstly,the manned space flights are described as a costly job fraught with peril and therefore,the author argues that we should not waste our resources on them and instead focus on unmanned expeditions.However,the author does not address the other side of the issue. To regard anything as useful and effective to a particular case , both the merits and demerits of it are to be considered and if one of them outweighs the other, then we can choose a side.Also, the manned space flights might be costly because of their advance features imbibed into them than those of the unmanned flights. So rather than focus only on the cost and completely outline the manned space flights,we have to be provided with a bigger perspective considering all the pros and cons of both the flights and then decide on a feasible option leading to efficacy.
Secondly,the author claims that manned space flights should be supplanted with the unmanned flights because of the underlying risk in manned flights.However,this is another feeble reason given by the author in support of his stance.Glancing at any historical success,one can observe that no great success involved plain sailing with no hazards.
Living in the constantly developing era of technology; the sweeping changes brought by digital computing which processes information in the speed thousand times faster than a blink of a eye; many successful manned space expeditions were conducted ;many astronauts delved into the vast unbounded space revealing many spectacles and valuable discoveries .The crave for space-development never dies and the space technology is ever improving with time because of the risks taken by many scientists and astronauts.In such times, it is not apt to say that because of the prevailing danger,manned flights should not be preferred.However,if the argument is to be strengthened,the author should include details of the dangers involved in both the flights in different scenarios and can then argue that one is better than the other.
Also, we do not know the precision and accuracy of the data gathered from unmanned space probes. Space missions are underlined with lot of uncertainties ;the robots or the probes must possess some set of cognition to be able to act in such undetermined situations.Suppose there is a sudden meteor attack directed towards the space craft , a machine might fail to take action if not programmed whereas a human in the same scenario can use his mental skill to solve that problem.In case of such adversities during the flight, a man uses his cognitive skills to act accordingly but a machine might just collapse making the whole experiment a failure with a substantial amount of loss for the equipment's. If the argument is to be strengthened,the credibility of the information gathered from the unmanned space flights is to be incorporated into the prompt.
Finally,the author also states that there was a recent success of the unmanned space probes ; although the statistics of its success rates are not provided and we need more information like what kind of mission they accomplished and how; maybe it wasn't involved with complex scenarios where men would have performed better.To strengthen his/her argument,details of the success rates with regard to the missions they accompanied are to be included in the prompt.
Therefore,we need more information on the statistics of the success, the description of the unmanned space probes ,and some other facts and substantial evidences to concur with the author's conclusion.
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'whereas', 'while', 'kind of', 'with regard to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230884557721 0.25644967241 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.166416791604 0.15541462614 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0974512743628 0.0836205057962 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0464767616192 0.0520304965353 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0344827586207 0.0272364105082 127% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.136431784108 0.125424944231 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0509745127436 0.0416121511921 122% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.20192866065 2.79052419416 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0284857571214 0.026700313972 107% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.128935532234 0.113004496875 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0209895052474 0.0255425247493 82% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00599700149925 0.0127820249294 47% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3828.0 2731.13054187 140% => OK
No of words: 615.0 446.07635468 138% => OK
Chars per words: 6.2243902439 6.12365571057 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97987886753 4.57801047555 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.382113821138 0.378187486979 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.284552845528 0.287650121315 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.20487804878 0.208842608468 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.144715447154 0.135150697306 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20192866065 2.79052419416 115% => OK
Unique words: 307.0 207.018472906 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49918699187 0.469332199767 106% => OK
Word variations: 62.5092496191 52.1807786196 120% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.039408867 55% => OK
Sentence length: 55.9090909091 23.2022227129 241% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 202.067168278 57.7814097925 350% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 348.0 141.986410481 245% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.9090909091 23.2022227129 241% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 0.724660767414 226% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.14285714286 136% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 3.58251231527 1005% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 84.3643754619 51.9672348444 162% => OK
Elegance: 1.69090909091 1.8405768891 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.48405739265 0.441005458295 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.252173085472 0.135418324435 186% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.076980396241 0.0829849096947 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.86053312409 0.58762219726 146% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152632586597 0.147661913831 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.30337345847 0.193483328276 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534904906596 0.0970749176394 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.463531014078 0.42659136922 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0743973855189 0.0774707102158 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.333063019847 0.312017818177 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609831769168 0.0698173142475 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.33743842365 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.87684729064 44% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.82512315271 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 6.46551724138 93% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 5.36822660099 56% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 14.657635468 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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