Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs."
The memorandum from the business manager agrue that increasing the time to weather and local news will atrract the more viewer and increase their revenues from advertising. He come to this conclusion on the basis of the viewers complain and cancellation of the local business advertisements. However, before recommendation can be properly evaluated, three questions must be answered.
First of all, does the majority of the viewer are complaining about the coverage of weather and local news? Perhaps, only the minority of the program viewer complains about it. There is no mention of the number of complaints received and total number of the viewer. The most of the viewer might like the national news more than the local news. They might be worldly rather than myopic. If the above condition has merit, the conclusion drawn on this argument is weakened.
Secondly, is the complaint is about increasing devotion towards local news and weather coverage? Perhaps they complains about the quality of the news provided. The news program are not providing actual news about the weather, their forecast about the weather for coming days is not matching in reality. The local business owner might have cancel their advertisement due to poor advertising technique of the program management team. They advertising technique might not helping for increement of the reputation of the business. If above is true, the argument does not hold the water.
Lastly, does the devotion in the local news and weather coverage will increase the revenue? Can increement in the local news guranteed the more revenue generation. Perhaps the national business company cancels their advertisement in the late night programs due to their devotion in local news. The programs can lose their nation viewer at the expense of increement in local viewer. If above situation is true, the assumptions manager have made are flawed.
In conclusion, the argument, as it stands now, is cosiderably flawed as it reliance on several unwarranted assumptions. If the author is able to answer the three question and offer more evidence, then it will be able to fully evaluate the recommendation offer by the manger of television station.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 354 350
No. of Characters: 1801 1500
No. of Different Words: 155 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.338 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.088 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.694 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 128 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 105 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 75 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.091 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.624 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.409 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.321 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.521 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.117 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 111, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'complain'
Suggestion: complain
...news and weather coverage? Perhaps they complains about the quality of the news provided....
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 340, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'canceled', 'cancelled'.
Suggestion: canceled; cancelled
...ty. The local business owner might have cancel their advertisement due to poor adverti...
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 415, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'assumptions'' or 'assumption's'?
Suggestion: assumptions'; assumption's
...viewer. If above situation is true, the assumptions manager have made are flawed. In c...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, then, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 13.6137724551 7% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 55.5748502994 85% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 16.3942115768 146% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 2260.96107784 82% => OK
No of words: 354.0 441.139720559 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25706214689 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77209623564 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 204.123752495 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466101694915 0.468620217663 99% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 705.55239521 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.70958083832 221% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3083068273 57.8364921388 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.5909090909 119.503703932 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 23.324526521 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.59090909091 5.70786347227 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 6.88822355289 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316852685263 0.218282227539 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981483162596 0.0743258471296 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998888374552 0.0701772020484 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175049433992 0.128457276422 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851177625419 0.0628817314937 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.3799401198 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.3550499002 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.5979740519 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 98.500998004 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.