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The selection of the national curriculum for the students pusuing school level education is not the trivial one. In fact it is not uncommon for the nation to ruminate on the decision.The prompt recommend that nation should not belabor this point too long and apply same national curriculum in for all school level students. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this suggestion and argue that nation should look inward rather than outward while choosing curriculum of school because of following two reasons.
To begin, most of the students studying in the school are children. Their mind is in the rudimentary stage, so nation curriculum should shape all of the students mind in the same way which is beneficial for their higher level education. For instance, potters use the clay for making different beautiful pots. They use a clay which they can shape easily so that it can aesthetically look better. In the same way, the mind of the children is also like the clay which can be shaped in the way they gain knowledge in their childhood. If there is same curriculum for all the school level students they will receive same knowledge in their childhood and able to shape their mind betterly.
Further, the school level students are mercurial. Their mind can sway here and there. For instance, if the nation allow different curriculum in this school level education they will not able to select which they should study. For a moment they can find one curriculum better and can consequently their mind can say another curriculum better. The students will be in a dilemma which curriculum they should choose. If the nation allow same curriculum then it is compulsion for the students to study the subjects on that curriculum and there will not mental pressure on the mind of students.
In this way, the same national curriculum is better for the students of the school level until they enter college for uniformly shaping their mind and allowing their mind free during their childhood.
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 50
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... the nation to ruminate on the decision.The prompt recommend that nation should not...
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Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...tage, so nation curriculum should shape all of the students mind in the same way which is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, look, so, then, while, for instance, in fact, in my opinion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 336.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00892857143 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50008503257 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 215.323595506 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.39880952381 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8452644157 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.1875 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.243740707755 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0831039109588 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150359130593 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 100.480337079 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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