Two years ago, radio station WCQP in Rockville decided to increase the number of call-in advice programs that it broadcast; since that time, its share of the radio audience in the Rockville listening area has increased significantly. Given WCQP's recent success with call-in advice programming, and citing a nationwide survey indicating that many radio listeners are quite interested in such programs, the station manager of KICK in Medway recommends that KICK include more call-in advice programs in an attempt to gain a larger audience share in its listening area.
The argument concludes that increase in number of call in advice programs would increase the radio audience .This conclusion is solely based on the nation-wide survey.But the argument fails to address the importance of the approach , kind of queries put forth by the audience to the radio stations advice programs and care taken to handle those queries. Also, the sample size on whom the survey is conducted is not mentioned in the argument.
Firstly,The argument assumes that the increase in advice programs would increase their respective radio station's audience.But this not might be the sole reason.According to the association of Radio,which conducts surveys on all the radio station across the city for every two years stated that the "RJ Sam" and his unconventional team in WCQP ,Rockville have left no stone un-turned to create a prim and proper conversation where audience would feel comfortable to seek an advice from radio station.They, would give audience its advice as realistic and meaningful as possible and have strived to remove the stigma behind any taboo topics by maintaining a healthy conversation for any advice.So,These could be some of the reasons for the increase in the audience rate.
Secondly,The survey mentioned in the argument doesn't provide the sample size considered during conducting the survey and the "Actual Percentage of Audience" who have provided their vote for the radio advice programs of the audience is not taken into consideration. and the the parameters like the audience interested topics and the approach for dealing the advice program are missed and these statistic details could probably misinterpret the actual reason behind the increase in radio station increment.So,These could probably fail to provide the proper survey details for the audience increment.
However,It is possible that the increase in advice programs in radio stations could be the reason for the increase in the audience,But claiming that this is the only reason would be difficult to believe .The argument should provide the possible approach and methods used by the WCQP ,Rockville and also provide the sample size for the survey conducted.Therefore,The recommendations made by the station manager of KICK in Medway that increase in number of call in advice programs would increase the radio audience is very weak in logic and thus open to discussion.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 391 350
No. of Characters: 1965 1500
No. of Different Words: 169 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.447 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.026 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.58 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 153 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 109 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 84 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 48.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 28.864 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.498 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.713 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.141 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 55.5748502994 86% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 16.3942115768 177% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 2260.96107784 90% => OK
No of words: 375.0 441.139720559 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.408 5.12650576532 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10661978112 2.78398813304 112% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 204.123752495 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453333333333 0.468620217663 97% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 705.55239521 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.67365269461 299% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 19.7664670659 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 22.8473053892 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 219.919240227 57.8364921388 380% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 338.0 119.503703932 283% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.5 23.324526521 268% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.3333333333 5.70786347227 251% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 34.0 5.25449101796 647% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323727165862 0.218282227539 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172220047279 0.0743258471296 232% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108865807636 0.0701772020484 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230708262446 0.128457276422 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613317130503 0.0628817314937 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.3 14.3799401198 245% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.09 48.3550499002 0% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.7 12.197005988 235% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.99 12.5979740519 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.32208582834 121% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 98.500998004 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.8 11.1389221557 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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