The vice president for human resources at climpson Industries sent the following recommendation to the company's president.
"In an effort to improve our employees' productivity, we should implement electronic monitoring of employees' Internet use from their workstations. Employees who use the Internet inappropriately from their workstations need
to be identified and punished if we are to reduce the number of work hours spent on personal
Or
recreational activities, such as shopping or playing games. Installing software on company computers to detect employees'
Internet use is the best way to prevent
employees from wasting time on the job. It will foster a better work ethic at Climpson and improve our overall profits."
The vice president for human resources of the company has suggested some changes to improve the employees' productivity to the company's president. Suggestion is that they should implement
an electonic monitoring system in all employees' workstation to monitor them if they are using Internet inappropriately. They need to
get punished if they need to reduce the number of work hours spent on personal and recreatinal activities. Vice president is assuming that installing software is the best way to prevent employees' from wasting their time.
The first assumption made by the vice president is that the employees need to be punished on the usage of the internet. This assumption is completely baseless as they have not mentioned that why is company providing internet facilities to all the employees. It might be there to increase the productivity of the employees and thus it is not at all wastage of time if they are using it. It is also not mentioned that at what time are employees using internet for personal use? As it is possible that they might have completed the work and they are resting and might be using the internet during that time. Also the person is talking about reducing the hours spent on personal and recreational activites if the employees are using internet for personal usage. This is not a good move as the it is very difficult to distinguish if the person is using internet for some office purpose or his personal purpose. This move will create a fear in employees' mind and they might stop using the internet at all. This might be the reason of the company's downfall.
The second assumption is that installing a software in employees' computer will help them to prevent employees from wasting their time and increase their productivity which will help to gain much more profit. But here the vice president is failing to understand that recreational activities are needed by the emplovees to increase their productivity. Because o the sortware it might be possible that emploves won't be wasting time on other thins like recreational activites, playing games,etc but it won't help the company. As during the work hours when an employee is tired, employee needs some recreational activities to keep his morale up. If his morale is down than it will only be the loss of the company as his productivity will also fall down. Vice president tries to say that it will foster better work ethic and improve profits but he is failing to understand that employees need recreational things and if no other recreational activites are there it won't be good for the company.
Vice President fails to convince us on his recommendation based on his assumptions. As the recommendation will have a negative effect which will reflect in the [company's development. Hence, the company's president should not use this recommendation as it will decrease the productivity of employees' and as a result of that it would also decrease the profits of the company
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...s suggested some changes to improve the employees productivity to the companys president....
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 39, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
... an electonic monitoring system in all employees workstation to monitor them if they are...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 605, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...be using the internet during that time. Also the person is talking about reducing th...
^^^^
Line 4, column 785, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
...sonal usage. This is not a good move as the it is very difficult to distinguish if the...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1000, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y might stop using the internet at all. This might be the reason of the companys dow...
^^^^
Line 5, column 486, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...ke recreational activites, playing games,etc but it wont help the company. As during...
^^^^
Line 6, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ecommendation based on his assumptions. As the recommendation will have a negative...
^^
Line 6, column 161, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: ']' seems to be missing
...gative effect which will reflect in the [companys development. Hence, the company...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, thus, talking about, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.6327345309 168% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.9520958084 170% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 13.6137724551 118% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 28.8173652695 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2465.0 2260.96107784 109% => OK
No of words: 497.0 441.139720559 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95975855131 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.56307096286 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87226000474 2.78398813304 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 204.123752495 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.376257545272 0.468620217663 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 774.9 705.55239521 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.85818245 57.8364921388 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.045454545 119.503703932 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5909090909 23.324526521 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.31818181818 5.70786347227 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 6.88822355289 160% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348118609672 0.218282227539 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122457983585 0.0743258471296 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874798010728 0.0701772020484 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212816156633 0.128457276422 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719893161331 0.0628817314937 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.3799401198 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.3550499002 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.32208582834 89% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 98.500998004 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...s suggested some changes to improve the employees productivity to the companys president....
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 39, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
... an electonic monitoring system in all employees workstation to monitor them if they are...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 605, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...be using the internet during that time. Also the person is talking about reducing th...
^^^^
Line 4, column 785, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
...sonal usage. This is not a good move as the it is very difficult to distinguish if the...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1000, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y might stop using the internet at all. This might be the reason of the companys dow...
^^^^
Line 5, column 486, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...ke recreational activites, playing games,etc but it wont help the company. As during...
^^^^
Line 6, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ecommendation based on his assumptions. As the recommendation will have a negative...
^^
Line 6, column 161, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: ']' seems to be missing
...gative effect which will reflect in the [companys development. Hence, the company...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, thus, talking about, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.6327345309 168% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.9520958084 170% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 13.6137724551 118% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 28.8173652695 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2465.0 2260.96107784 109% => OK
No of words: 497.0 441.139720559 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95975855131 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.56307096286 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87226000474 2.78398813304 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 204.123752495 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.376257545272 0.468620217663 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 774.9 705.55239521 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.85818245 57.8364921388 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.045454545 119.503703932 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5909090909 23.324526521 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.31818181818 5.70786347227 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 6.88822355289 160% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348118609672 0.218282227539 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122457983585 0.0743258471296 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874798010728 0.0701772020484 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212816156633 0.128457276422 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719893161331 0.0628817314937 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.3799401198 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.3550499002 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.32208582834 89% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 98.500998004 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.