In this age of intensive media coverage, it is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
I do agree with the authors statement that In this age of intensive media coverage, it is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero. In support of my view i will provide three reasons. However i do concede in some case it is possible that media can represent a local man/women as a hero.
First of all, In today's era, what you see is sold only. Hence the main focus of media is conspicuous celebrities like film stars ,sports men politicians and bushiness men etc. For example , if any film star comes in any grand wedding wedding function, he will attract the whole charm of public and media instead of bride and groom are the hero of that celebration. The second reason behind this is interest of general public. General public is very keen to know about celebrities life and wants to be like them. It again increase the focus of media on celebrities. For example, TV serials which are based on celebrities life are more popular and major source of income for TV channel. Debates between popular politicians, celebs attract more public attention than general debate.
Money plays a very important role in thriving of any bushiness and it is true for media bushiness too. Hence the third reason is media also needs money to run itself and celebrities are perfect source to provide it. It is like give and take. Media is making reputation of celebs among general public and being paid for it by those celebrities.
In some case, media covers the story of general pubic also. For example , a single click of Pakistani tea seller became internet sensation and today he is a billionaire super model.
In conclusion, i agree with author that in today's era it is very difficult to attain media attention, if you are a general pubic. However in some cases it is possible too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, second, so, third, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in some cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 321.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65420560748 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49016122227 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538940809969 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7549240714 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6315789474 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8947368421 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31900195999 0.243740707755 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845390500126 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152528283403 0.0758088955206 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176299344143 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.180918423892 0.0667264976115 271% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 14.1392134831 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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