The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Society has dependency on people and eventually the young generation when they get older they will take the responsibility of society to conduct the society properly. However, it is important for the society to prepare the young generation for the future. Thus, the propmt recommends that, the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government , industry or other fields is by installing in them a sence of cooperation, not competition. I mostly agree with the recommendation for the following two reasons, but I do concede that the competition must remain at a certain level, cause without having any competition they won't have any motivation to do the good works for the betterment of the society.
First of all, In the real life and society the people who are working in the government,industry or any other sectors they work together along side with each other because for the development of society and country coopearation of each other is needed and it makes the society evern better. For example, a man/woman who wants to become the Prime Minister of country, if he is raised under a competitive environment than to become PM he/she can do anything or can conduct any unfair means to achieve his goal whereas if he/she is raised under a cooperative environment he/she will try his/her best to be fair and even if he/she loses the elcetion he/she will be cooperative with the rulling party for the betterment of the society. In addition, in any kind of job if the person who was raised in a competitive environement will try to get the best position of the company by any means and will try to hamper others for his betterment but the person who was raised in a cooperative environment won't do this rather he/she try his best to work with his teammates and do better for the company. In the society the impact of people is very high so to make a better society it is really important to create a mindset of the people for cooperation. By, cooperating people will work with each other, they will help each other and they will try their best for the betterment of each other and thus the society will be benefitted.
To Conclude, i do agree with the prompt that it is important to insist sense of cooperation in the minds of young people rather than competition. But, I do concede that without any competition the young generation will fail to have any motivation to set any goal in their life and pursue anything for their betterment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , industry
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Suggestion: alongside
...or any other sectors they work together along side with each other because for the develop...
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Suggestion: tries
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, so, thus, whereas, for example, in addition, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 12.9106741573 232% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2063.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 433.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76443418014 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80675900491 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.411085450346 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 656.1 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 23.0359550562 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.3482064041 60.3974514979 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 187.545454545 118.986275619 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.3636363636 23.4991977007 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.21951772744 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270073448684 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143952823806 0.0831039109588 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917742601055 0.0758088955206 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208670107411 0.150359130593 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964079711096 0.0667264976115 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 14.1392134831 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.2143820225 157% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.