A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The national curriculum plays the most important and vital role for the development and educational growth of a student. However, discrimination of the subjects before college may have a bad impact on the educational life of a student. Thus, the prompt recommends that A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. I mostly agree with the recommendation for the following two reasons, but I do concede that the nation should also consider the fact that the different courses before college shouldn't be a burden for the students, so the quantity of different courses should be minimized so that it becomes beneficial for the students.
First of all, before college a student must have some knowledge in order to get the idea about different subjects because it will help them to grow more in future and when they get into real life it will help them to make a better decision in real life. For example, If a student who has studied engineering in college and then in real life if a random person asks him about some geographical question, and if he fails to answer then it will be a shameful incident for him because the person who asked the question will say despite being an engineer you are unable to answer a question. In addition, a student who has studied medical, if he has some courses before college about the psychology and how people behaves then it will help the medical student to treat the patient properly and will able to know how to deal with the patient what should be the way of talking and dealing for the betterment of patient. In the real world having the idea of an overall picture is always a good thing for a student because it will help them to make the right decision and the correct time. When a student matures they have to talk with various types of people and also in the job sector only knowing his/her own domain isn't good enough to be perfect. Anyone would prefer someone who has knowledge of a lot of domains rather than a specific domain.
To conclude, I agree that as a nation it should give the opportunity to the students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college for the two reasons outlined above. because it will give them a fair chance of getting to know everything. But, I do concede that the curriculum shouldn't be too complex and lengthy so that it becomes a burden for them to study different types of subjects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, then, thus, for example, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2014.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 435.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62988505747 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50690050435 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448275862069 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 641.7 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.9928242977 60.3974514979 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.923076923 118.986275619 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4615384615 23.4991977007 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 5.21951772744 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260758792084 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108029910135 0.0831039109588 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119450513064 0.0758088955206 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209940534061 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746255000495 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 14.1392134831 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 48.8420337079 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.