The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or any other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The author of this statement makes an assertion that young minds can be nurtured for becoming great leaders in fields of government, industry etc. by imaprting them the sense of cooperation rather than competition. Beyond doubt, better leadership qualities are the most sought after in todays era. But I find the authors assertion to be inapplicable to a large extent as far as the scenario of the modern world is concerned.
Young minds are huge repositories of ideas. When these minds are provided a proper path to nurture themselves, they grow into something thats pathbreaking and to a great extent impact this world. This nurturing of minds start right from the person's birth till he becomes a contributor to the society which he is a part of. Better leaders are the inevitable parts of each and every field. This fact makes nurturing of good leaders even more crucial. Leaders are the ones that strive themselves to the pinnacle of success as well as their make their followers do so. Every leader is well aware that there are other leaders too that are on the path of achieving similar goals. And the zeal for that makes competition an inevitable part of the leadership stratergies
Competition makes the leader even more wary about the stratergies that he is currently implementing as well as those which he will implement in the future. The best example for one of such aspects are the competitive exams. The entrance exams for the esteem Indian Institute of Technology are considered among the most challenging examinations at global level. Every year, nearly two to three lacs of students appear for it and only a few thousands of them are admitted. Throughout the course of preparation, the students are a part under a highly competitive environment. In fact, there is an entire city that is dedicated to the coaching centers of such examinations that is named as Kota situated in the state of Rajashtan in India. The students at such centers appear for their mock tests with tens of thousands of student, all of them striving to achieve the best ranks. This may seem to be higly pain-staking but such competitive environments encourage them to give the best out of them eventually becoming better leaders. These people turn out to be the founders ov several million dollar companies like Flipkart, OLA cabs etc.
Competitions are even present in the coporate jobs. The employees are divided into several teams and each of the is offered some incentives on the basis of the targets that they achieve. Such competitions are profitable to the employees as well as their organizations which are surely benifitted from their employees achieving the specified targets. These policies increase the zeal of the employees as well as make them well aware of the current market situtations.
Thus , as competition is a part and parcel of each and every sector of the modern world, instilling a sense of competition among the young minds will contribute significantly in their becoming better leaders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, thus, well, in fact, such as, as well as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2511.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 503.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99204771372 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79162577107 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487077534791 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 783.9 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5080456344 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.44 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.12 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 10.2758426966 214% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174258499491 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461277880151 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495512804781 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932818604132 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575588694694 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 100.480337079 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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