The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
What you do to children, they do to society. The young people of any society are its future torchbearers, hence, to ensure development and growth in the society, one must instill good qualities and values in the youth. Effective communication, a sense of cooperation, and a positive attitude are the qualities of a good leader. However, healthy competition promotes a sense of productivity and enables a person to work to the best of his or her capability. Therefore, while I agree that one must learn to work with others as a team in order to produce optimal gains and a progressive society, it is also important to instill a sense of healthy competition among the youth.
There is competition in every field, be it governance, where there are several parties vying for authority and control, or industry, with different companies trying to promote their products or services as the best available in the market. Hence, instilling a sense of competition is equally important as cooperation. However, one must ensure that competition is healthy and productive. Healthy competition instills within people the need for hard work, constant learning, and improvement. It helps keep the market balanced. Knowledge of your competition is important as ignorance can prove to be very expensive.
However, as a society, one must have a mindset of collaboration and cooperation. In order to function properly, being able to work with others is an important skill that the youth should have. There are several factors that come together to make an industry, numerous people working on different parts of a problem, in different geographical locations even. Managing every element is only possible through efficient communication and undue cooperation. If a car is being assembled, there are several teams working on different parts of the car. One team could be working on the engine, while another could be working on fuel usage optimization. It is essential that these two teams work together to mitigate any discrepancies in the design in order to produce a comprehensive solution.
It is a well-known fact that children start learning at a very young age through observation and imitation. Hence, it is absolutely necessary that parents start teaching important skills like sharing, cooperation, healthy competition, etc. to the children so that they are prepared for the real-world. To best prepare the youth, they should be exposed to different real-life scenarios and educated on the best responses in such situations. An amalgam of competition and cooperation is the best solution for a progressive society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
...observation and imitation. Hence, it is absolutely necessary that parents start teaching important s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2196.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 418.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25358851675 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09145343097 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480861244019 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8620990738 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4782608696 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1739130435 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5652173913 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176625012805 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522715132369 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507348512419 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11740991412 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601273303632 0.0667264976115 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.