Claim: It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
In today’s fast-paced digital age, the question of whether it is possible for a society to regard any living man or women as a hero is a matter of great debate. The society is changing every times and new generation see the new hero from different kinds of perspectives and make common ideas about the person. I partially agree with the statement that it is not longer possible for a society to regard any living man or women as a hero because the reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished. A hero bechome supernatural for his specific kind of work but not her all work but media srcutinize a personal character to personal life and make a subject to media trail that hamper the hero’s reputation completely.
First of all, in the advancement of digital media there are a lost of news paper, channel or agencies run by the corporate house, and they have a specific goal to follow. Now all the news agences are working for the interest of group of people, or a society, or a country and they use the media as a medium to oppression. Many people do a great work for the society but they are ignored by the media or over strutinized by the media, so his good work are destroyed in a short period of time. Now a days many media trying to represent many social medai entertainer as a hero because in today’s world all things are counted based on social media like, share, and views. The media represent their as hero for more audience to to watch their news or content on social medai or on internet, but they are not hero at all. They do simple tiktok video or youtube video to entertain the people.
In our society many people try to do a good job for the society, and they are the main hero of our life. Many people are defamed in the media for political issues, but he has not any political connection. Many socail medai don’t show the hero in the media because it will generate money from the news. Any political leader is not a hero today because of social media because they represent the leader negatively or positively, and hamper the reputation of the leader. Sone media represent the person positively ans some medai represent them as negatively and finally he is no more a hero.
The government should use strict rules for this issues, but sometimes the government use them against the hero for their political reason, breacuse there is no freedom fo speech in many country of the world like North Korea. There is only one hero, the suprem leader of the country, but there must be more heroes.
Medai help to represent the hero sometimes. Any national player playing for the country are celebrated as hero. The medai plays the key roles to make this player as hero. The supreme person of the country are represented as hero and celebrated as hero. Although media has a negative effect to regard a man or women as hero, media also present someone as hero depending on their interest. But we know all about heroes form the social medai, so it has a great contribution to make a man hero, because media can reach to a ample amount of people in short time.
In conclusion, media plays a double standard role to make a men or women hero depending on their interest, so it is not possible to readrd a living men or women as hero. But media is not all the bed they also help to make man hero if it will not harm the corporate house who run the media.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
In today’s fast-paced digital age, the question of whether it is possible for a society to regard ...
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Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...nt of digital media there are a lost of news paper, channel or agencies run by the corpora...
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Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have a specific goal to follow. Now all the news agences are working for the int...
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Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... his good work are destroyed in a short period of time. Now a days many media trying to repres...
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Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...re destroyed in a short period of time. Now a days many media trying to represent many soc...
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Line 3, column 498, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...estroyed in a short period of time. Now a days many media trying to represent many soc...
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Line 3, column 722, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...present their as hero for more audience to to watch their news or content on social m...
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Line 6, column 44, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... government should use strict rules for this issues, but sometimes the government us...
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Line 8, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...metimes. Any national player playing for the country are celebrated as hero. The ...
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Line 8, column 520, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... a man hero, because media can reach to a ample amount of people in short time. ...
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Line 10, column 59, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a man' or simply 'men'?
Suggestion: a man; men
...ia plays a double standard role to make a men or women hero depending on their inter...
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Line 10, column 61, Rule ID: MAN_MEN[1]
Message: 'man' is the singular form of 'men'. Consider using 'man'?
Suggestion: man
... plays a double standard role to make a men or women hero depending on their inter...
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Line 10, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble standard role to make a men or women hero depending on their interest, so it ...
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Line 10, column 150, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'man'?
Suggestion: man
...o it is not possible to readrd a living men or women as hero. But media is not all ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, in conclusion, in short, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 14.8657303371 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2795.0 2235.4752809 125% => OK
No of words: 623.0 442.535393258 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48635634029 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.99599519102 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43583671997 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.39165329053 0.4932671777 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 935.1 704.065955056 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 1.77640449438 676% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6331748955 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.8 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.92 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.24 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 10.2758426966 214% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255632076009 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896846214471 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871126634617 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155619516737 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831424568746 0.0667264976115 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 12.1639044944 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.