Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.
In today's fast-paced digital world, the government of any country faces an ample amount of challenges and needs to solve different kinds of problem everyday. There is a great debate whether Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future. I partially agree with the statement, but I belive government also focus on upcoming problems.
First and formost, government does a lot of things for the betterment of the nation and it's population, but problems are everyday issues to run a country.Every day government solves a large amount of problems, but problems need immediate attention like health usses, education and hunger issue. For example, during the COVID-19 pendamic all governments main issssue was health care problem and solved this problem. Additionally managing vaccine and solving hunger issue, death management issue etc was the main problem, so all the government focued the immediate problmes and solved these problems.
Additionally, education is the main funamental right for all citizens, and there are ample amount of problem with the education, so government should solve this problem immediately, and provide better education to the prople, and make a better citizen for the nation. For example, in Bangladesh government provides free book at the first day of the year so that sudents can start their study from the beginning of the year, and can focus more on study ,and no child are left out of education, and by adressin this issue goverenment are mainly solving the anticipated problem.
Moreover, if there is any protest or relly governent should placates the issues otherwise the country will be unrest and chaoses will be every where like war. Goverenment should gives money to the poor citizen of the country so that there is not any chaose in the territory. Government should address the unemplyment problem as fast as possible and make ample amount of job vacant for the youth generation otherwise the country will not progress. Government should focus on the economy of the country and make necessary steps to make theeconomy stable with the central bank
However, government also need to focus on the long term issues like environmental problems and infrastructures development. They shold make plans for development of roads and highwasy for communation and increase powerplants to fuel the economy. They keep the country politically stabtle otherwise there will be no foreign investment to fuel the economy. Government should make long term plan like five year or ten year plan to make a better country othewise they will not progress easily.
In conclusion, governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future, but they must makes a plan to solve the anticipated probelms and solve the problems in proper time , oterwise it will hit the country hard.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...eds to solve different kinds of problem everyday. There is a great debate whether Gover...
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Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rent kinds of problem everyday. There is a great debate whether Governments shoul...
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Line 1, column 392, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h the statement, but I belive government also focus on upcoming problems. Firs...
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Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Every
...ms are everyday issues to run a country.Every day government solves a large amount of...
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Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...h care problem and solved this problem. Additionally managing vaccine and solving hunger iss...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... problmes and solved these problems. Additionally, education is the main funamental right...
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Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...t for all citizens, and there are ample amount of problem with the education, so gover...
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Line 5, column 452, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...of the year, and can focus more on study ,and no child are left out of education, ...
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Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'placate'
Suggestion: placate
...s any protest or relly governent should placates the issues otherwise the country will b...
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Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: EVERY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'everywhere'?
Suggestion: everywhere
...ntry will be unrest and chaoses will be every where like war. Goverenment should gives mone...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 179, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...very where like war. Goverenment should gives money to the poor citizen of the count...
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Line 7, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hould gives money to the poor citizen of the country so that there is not any cha...
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Line 7, column 535, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...country and make necessary steps to make theeconomy stable with the central bank ...
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Line 9, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for communation and increase powerplants to fuel the economy. They keep the count...
^^
Line 9, column 422, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'plan' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'plans'.
Suggestion: plans
...ng term plan like five year or ten year plan to make a better country othewise they ...
^^^^
Line 11, column 253, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ms and solve the problems in proper time , oterwise it will hit the country hard.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2498.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 478.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22594142259 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76671913436 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458158995816 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 772.2 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.77640449438 563% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.3842758859 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.125 118.986275619 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.875 23.4991977007 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.512292754766 0.243740707755 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202377027998 0.0831039109588 244% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.216689213201 0.0758088955206 286% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.34007065402 0.150359130593 226% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.225468856491 0.0667264976115 338% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 14.1392134831 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...eds to solve different kinds of problem everyday. There is a great debate whether Gover...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rent kinds of problem everyday. There is a great debate whether Governments shoul...
^^
Line 1, column 392, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h the statement, but I belive government also focus on upcoming problems. Firs...
^^
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Every
...ms are everyday issues to run a country.Every day government solves a large amount of...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...h care problem and solved this problem. Additionally managing vaccine and solving hunger iss...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... problmes and solved these problems. Additionally, education is the main funamental right...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...t for all citizens, and there are ample amount of problem with the education, so gover...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 452, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...of the year, and can focus more on study ,and no child are left out of education, ...
^^
Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'placate'
Suggestion: placate
...s any protest or relly governent should placates the issues otherwise the country will b...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: EVERY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'everywhere'?
Suggestion: everywhere
...ntry will be unrest and chaoses will be every where like war. Goverenment should gives mone...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 179, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...very where like war. Goverenment should gives money to the poor citizen of the count...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hould gives money to the poor citizen of the country so that there is not any cha...
^^
Line 7, column 535, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...country and make necessary steps to make theeconomy stable with the central bank ...
^^
Line 9, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for communation and increase powerplants to fuel the economy. They keep the count...
^^
Line 9, column 422, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'plan' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'plans'.
Suggestion: plans
...ng term plan like five year or ten year plan to make a better country othewise they ...
^^^^
Line 11, column 253, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ms and solve the problems in proper time , oterwise it will hit the country hard.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2498.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 478.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22594142259 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76671913436 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458158995816 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 772.2 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.77640449438 563% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.3842758859 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.125 118.986275619 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.875 23.4991977007 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.512292754766 0.243740707755 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202377027998 0.0831039109588 244% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.216689213201 0.0758088955206 286% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.34007065402 0.150359130593 226% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.225468856491 0.0667264976115 338% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 14.1392134831 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.