Competition for high grades seriously limits the quality of learning at all levels of education.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Education is the fundamental right for all human in the world, and classroom or educational institution has become the center of education for thounds of years. Competition has become the most attracting and dynamic over history of human in all areas of life which creat classes in the society or an environment.I partially agree with the statement that competition for high grades seriously limits the quality of learning at all levels of education. In today’s competitive school system competition with grade is the main attract of study.
First of all, most of the students and their parents all over the world want a higher grade in the class or exam which lead the students only grade based learning. In school there is a limited amount of syllabus which is taught in the class and students use their all time to prepare for this short amount of syllabus. So they don’t explore others field of study that will intertest them. For example, Rohit is a top student at his class in a focus school in Bangladesh. He uses most of his time in school, private tuition, and self study the appointed syllabus. He doesn’t participate in other activity and over the time he become axhousted with the academic system and does not grow. So this competition doesn’t help the students in critical thinking, problem solving, leadership skill and do a good research in their field so the knowledge doesn’t entend.
Additionally, classroom or adademci curriculum is not only medium of learning. There are lost of medium of learning alongside classroom like online classes, clubs, YouTube videos, pear groups, and others. A high grader students usually only focus on academic curriculum so they are not interested outside of the curriculum and have little knowledge in others fields. A recent research shoes that most of the high grader students don’t do in the job field because they are not compatible for this post. They have only bookish knowledge but now practical knowledge. Todays mony low grader students in Bangladesh are using internet to learn freelancing and earning a lots of money internationally.
Moreover, competition is not alway bad. Some competitive students explore others fields then the academic curriculum and achieve a lots of accomplishment, because high grade students are hard working, discmpilne and more motivated to do a job than low grader students . High grade of students represent a students seriousness and dedication for their work. Some corporate or job looks for high grade students because they believe that high grader is a sign of more competent employees.
In conclusion, competition for high grades seriously limits the quality of learning at all levels of education. This competition creates a unhealthy environment in the classroom and no sharing of khwoledge is occured and can’t learn from one another. Although competition for high grade make students nerds, it sometime do good also and make it more competent citizen of the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, then, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2517.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 486.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17901234568 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80127595412 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454732510288 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 766.8 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2247650228 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.434782609 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1304347826 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82608695652 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244617409169 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812429687117 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953122934617 0.0758088955206 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168362636863 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10634283662 0.0667264976115 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.