Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
In order to proceed with this argument, we first need to define “success”. What does success mean for a student? Is it about simply the student doing well in a field of study relative to others? Is it about eventually pursuing or having a good career goal? If not, is success about pursuing happiness and one’s satisfaction in engaging in a particular study? Depending on the definition of success, the argument may vary. In this essay, I will define success as performing better than others in understanding the concepts and applying them to a greater field of real-life situations in a particular discipline.
The primary responsibility of educational institutions is to expose students to various fields of study to guide them through navigating the scholarly world of diverse discipline and help them find where their potential lies. Given this function of educational institutions, it is understandable why some would argue that they should actively dissuade students when they choose to study a particular field in which they seem not to be performing well. However, I argue that this dissuasion is an unnecessary manipulation and intervention of schools into students’ own free choice; it not only hinders students from having an independent attitude in life, but also does a poor job of guiding students to success. Educational institutions should be the kind of institution that should maintain the most amount of trust in students. They should value and respect their choices, and encourage students to make independent choices while supporting them with various resources so that their efforts would have a better payoff. The backbone of every school is the diversity and the motivation of students wanting to build their own unique lives, and schools should believe in the students for the choices they make. We all know ourselves the best, and there must be a good reason why a student would want to pursue a particular field of study, even when he or she is not performing well at it now.
To be sure, one may claim that students lack the knowledge and experience of school professionals such as teachers and guidance counselors, and thus it is necessary for educational professionals to dissuade them from making choices them seem to be at odds with their benefit. I admit that, to a certain extent, guidance and advice are needed when students make important decisions. For example, when students select top three majors to study when applying to colleges, they can talk to their college counselors or their most trusted teachers to gain some insight on their academic performance and what they suggest the student to study. However, I argue that an active dissuasion to make students revoke their decision to pursue a certain field of study is excessively didactic. For example, when a student who has failed all the Math classes chooses to major in Math in college, there must be a good reason why the student has made such a decision. It could be that he wants to continue studying math to overcome his weakness in Math, or it could even be that he still is interested in some other mechanisms of Math that he further wants to investigate in college. However, if a guidance counselor dissuades that student from making that chioce, it makes it impossible for that student to ever find out if he has potential of being great in Math. Therefore, schools should always respect the students’ choices. Although guidance is necessary, an active refusal or denial of students’ choice is excessively authoritative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 33.0505617978 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2964.0 2235.4752809 133% => OK
No of words: 586.0 442.535393258 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05802047782 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92010537223 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87786580899 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 215.323595506 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465870307167 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 900.0 704.065955056 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1948947675 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.869565217 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4782608696 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.60869565217 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199331742495 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611569872862 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412424508586 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135498577315 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531719248249 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 100.480337079 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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