Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed
The given context says that educational institutions have responsibility to dissuade students or persuade them to not pursue those courses in which they are unlikely to succeed or fail. I agree with the authors context because i believe that educational institution plays a major role in both graduation and the career the student might be in the future . As our society strongly believes that a good institution will provide good education and provide more career opportunities for students to get placed in the corporate companies .
In my view, a student who is about to enter a university or an college is like a amateur and they don't have any idea of the society outside. Thus, it is more likely that they will make mistakes and will be easily manipulated by the ideas and opinions of others. They might as well be scared in pursuing their dream in confusion of whether they will get succeed or not . Thus, i strongly suggest that educational institution must guide the students who were about to join by interacting with them and giving more examples to make them clear about what they were about to do .
Since the world is growing , the entertainment industry is playing a vital role in peoples choices and they were manipulating those viewers by giving false advertisements.
For example those X named institutions in India is displaying those advertisements saying about all those ranks and marks in important exams and this is the main thing those students were infatuated by those advertisements and they were willing to do that course instead of the course in which they were interested. So, in my opinion this kind of publicity must be stopped and those institutions provide timely knowledge about the career opportunities etc.
In another scenario, may be it was seven or eight years ago a movie named " Happy Days" , influenced those youth in that period and they were infatuated by the college life shown and the percentage of students pursuing engineering in that period gradually increased during that period , most of them were failed because they were only focused on the enjoyment rather than their passion. So , in order for them to avoid those silly mistakes and ruin their lives they must be guided by the educational institution before they were entering the stream.
Thus i conclude that it will be helpful for the students to be guided by the educational institution and they will have a clear cut understanding of what they were doing or what kind of crisis or about the opportunities available in that particular stream . This will create an awareness among the students and they will take a decision about the stream or career they were pursuing rather than on passion and misguidance given by people outside . Also, it will help them understand how the society outside is and the competition for the opportunities they will have in future . This will provide awareness and increase seriousness among the students to choose the right path and be succeeded.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, thus, well, for example, kind of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 33.0505617978 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2491.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 501.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97205588822 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73107062784 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80861208595 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439121756487 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 792.0 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.0669934992 60.3974514979 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.6875 118.986275619 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3125 23.4991977007 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 7.80617977528 512% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271527183049 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115211931535 0.0831039109588 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110643857477 0.0758088955206 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154856022462 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101596417503 0.0667264976115 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 48.8420337079 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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