Emotions and logic
Decision, by definition, is an act of taking some steps based on an issue or situation. Some argue that decisions should be made based on our feelings or mood per time since emotions would always be affected in every positive or negative decision we make. But others would state that appropriate decisions can never be made when our emotions are at its peak or at in a weak state. It is certain that decision making is a crucial step in a everyone's life that has to be taken at one point or the other ca that can either make or mar us.
Those that would argue that decisions should be made solely on emotions because they can be justified logically based their present feelings. These people seem to see this as being reasonable, but do those decisions made based on emotions pay them in a long run? Emotions made appear like the perfect judge for decision making but how many people actually think logically when their emotions are heightened or weak.However, on very rare occasions, one might say one made the great decision when emotions are involved.
Now consider, the killing of twins in Calabar,Nigeria which was stopped by Mary Slessor is surely one of the the most exceptional case where people made a decisions based on their emotions then try to justify those decisions logically. The act was abolished because Mary Slessor helped to understand that twins were like other children and not evil which was contrary to popular notion back then.
In conclusion, it's clear that decisions made solely on emotions mar us thus people who make such decisions are poor decision makers.If anything, emotional made decisions contradicts the real essence of decision making which is to better our lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so, then, thus, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 292.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8595890411 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55848048399 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541095890411 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.6890299786 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.9 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2 23.4991977007 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218904114248 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985626373231 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946709790724 0.0758088955206 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138813727737 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107866852378 0.0667264976115 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 100.480337079 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.