People who make decisions based on emotions and justify them with logic are often poor decision makers.
Making decisions based on emotions and using logic to prove them afterwards is common place in every aspect of our human lives. Most times, people are often left with no other option than to draw very important decisions at the their disadvantaged position. Tense emotional surges are generally perceived in the psychological world as period of raucous and unpredictable positions to call the best judgement. Drawing from some of these flaws associated with fervid emotions, one cannot but agree to take a vantage stance against any form of critical decision-making at such times.
Further more, emotional judgements are usually triggered by the fear of missing out (FOMO). For example, a particular buyer of stocks might want to thrown in all his/her investment in particular commodity of choice due to its initial outlook thereby neglecting other red flags. these are opportunity grabbers who interests only lies in making the most of the opportunity at hand. such persons acting on time limitations might neglect other critical aspects of decision-making. As a good investor, one must consider the nature of the stock and must appreciate some technical indicators that might point to the success or downfall of a particular investment. In 2018, Jumia stocks became listed on the New York stock exchange, it generated rave reviews and it raised significant amount of capital from investors shares during those preliminary days. After some years, the stocks are failing and investors driven and clouded by their emotions are now biting their fingers.
Patience is an important virtue. this cannot be over emphasized in our fast paced world today. most marriages and homes today have been shattered due to hasty conclusions drawn during trying times. decisions not bounded by this virtue are often times regrettable. The best decisions are not made during intense emotional expeditions. It clearly debases any iota of rationality that should be expended while carefully following a process through. we can assume that it piques on rationality. When decisions are drawn out of patience, one is often not left alone but rather have to seek help from others. such decisions have very little to no tendency of being falsely drawn.
In our fast paced world where bounteous amount of data abounds, hasty judgements have been shown to fail severely. critical studies are essential to make decisions in any aspect of life. fervid emotions do not make provisions for that. For example, the President of the United States was drawn into making erroneous assertions during the stint of the pandemic. He often times suggested the use medically uncertified methods to approach the ravaging scourge. On a normal day, statistics would have been reeled out from solid inferences made from a pool of data. such unwantomed statements reverberated across the world causing pillage of some drugs meant for other uses.
In conclusion, we can clearly obtain that one cannot rule out having to grab some opportunities by making those emotional decisions. They can save an abusive marriage without having to draw too much logic because it is what it is, it can make one utilize the best investment windows and, they can be a source of fortitude needed in dying times. Nonetheless, most of these decisions are fraught erroneous judgement. When decisions are based on emotions or on simple logic, patience is killed, rationality maimed and panic exalted without substantial evidence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, nonetheless, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 85.0 58.6224719101 145% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2912.0 2235.4752809 130% => OK
No of words: 556.0 442.535393258 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23741007194 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85588840946 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74379566993 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 308.0 215.323595506 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553956834532 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 930.6 704.065955056 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4040665236 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.935483871 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.935483871 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58064516129 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274444834781 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687245267061 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740388093033 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158090533586 0.150359130593 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831934889415 0.0667264976115 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 153.0 100.480337079 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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