Every day technology such as calculator as cash register have decrease our abilities to perform simple calculation, a “use it or lose it” approach to thinking abilities.
Firstly, we know the how much we are connected to the technology in our routine life.
It facilitate us with many ways like. The use of mobile, computers, latest transport, new communication technologies in the form of E-mails facilities, internet etc. mobile has reduce the distance between two person live in any part of the world and plays important role to maintain the relation between them. Online classes to educate the person, email to very quickly spread important information and to update any one in time.
Secondly, today in this competitive era, time is so precious. With using computers and latest transport, we can reduce transportation time which save our time we can utilize it to solve more complicated problems of life. We can have time for ourself and for families to spend with. We can develop our mental capacity by engaging our self in complex situation and enhance our knowledge. Like that, calculator is also very important to make the calculation very easy and helpful to save time.
Moreover, new generation is inspired by the innovation and creativity. They can use latest technologies to develop new gadgets or new instruments to make life easier. For example, new application in mobile like “AAROGYA SETU”.We know that how undoubtedly important it is in today’s situation india is passing through due to COVID-19. This application must be someone’s creativity to save many person’s life by taking precautions and remind us to stay safe and alert to be healthy.
However, how much we use these all technology and the way of using is also very important. Excessive use of anything must have negative impact in anyways. For Example, using too much computer reduce the physical strength. To avoid walking for small distance and using car is a positive use of it. It take us towards the laziness and affect the physical fitness.
In conclusion, I would clearly support the positive side of using latest technologies and its high impact in every individual’s life as well as to accelerate the speed of progress. Negative point presented here by author is valid to some extand but, not using technology is create more complications and make life complicated. Adequate use of it will always have positive result.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
Firstly, we know the how much we are connected to the technology...
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Line 2, column 4, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'facilitates'?
Suggestion: facilitates
...the technology in our routine life. It facilitate us with many ways like. The use of mobi...
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Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the latest'.
Suggestion: , the latest
... ways like. The use of mobile, computers, latest transport, new communication technologi...
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Line 2, column 177, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
...ls facilities, internet etc. mobile has reduce the distance between two person live in...
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Line 2, column 209, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
...ile has reduce the distance between two person live in any part of the world and plays...
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Line 2, column 413, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...ead important information and to update any one in time. Secondly, today in this ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation and to update any one in time. Secondly, today in this competitive era,...
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Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'use the latest'.
Suggestion: use the latest
...the innovation and creativity. They can use latest technologies to develop new gadgets or ...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
...plication in mobile like “AAROGYA SETU”.We know that how undoubtedly important it ...
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Line 7, column 301, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
...d using car is a positive use of it. It take us towards the laziness and affect the ...
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Line 9, column 61, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'using the latest'.
Suggestion: using the latest
...ld clearly support the positive side of using latest technologies and its high impact in eve...
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Line 9, column 275, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'created'.
Suggestion: created
...ome extand but, not using technology is create more complications and make life compli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 371.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09703504043 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87535769393 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541778975741 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4968882633 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9545454545 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8636363636 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95454545455 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139211088216 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429949622016 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370684979567 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732218982487 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367800709411 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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