Arctic deers....
The author present the claim that the declination in the population of deer who lives in the arctic regions of Canada is the result of the global warming.As they are unable to find food in nearby regions and it causes the reduction in the scope of survival for them.Also this is reported by the local hunters as stated in the arguments. however, The Only reason of declination in the number of deer might be the result of may different factors and not only the global warming. Moreover the report submitted by the local hunters may not be authentic or might not be verified by the authorities. the claim can not be supported by the strong evidence.
First, the argument presented here that arctic deer move around the regions were the atmosphere is suitable for the plant on which they travel through the ocean. Is there only one type of animals who lives in these islands? there might be a chance that the there are many other animals who hunt them and is a on of the factors to reduce the population of the deer.The author has not presented such survey or proof of such investigation hence the argument is not strong to supportive.
In addition, As stated that report considered by the author is of local hunters. are they authorized or is there any proof that they have reported correctly? how they have done a survey? As they are hunters, it is reasonable to consider themselves responsible for declination. It might possible that they have increase the hunting more and due to this the deer population is declined. hence the argument might be unjustifiable.
Moreover, the are on which arctic deer forage, the plant grows in limitation. there might not be a abundant amount of plants or the growth is slower then is is eat by deer. It is necessary to survey on the plants also. As deer eat the plants hence it might possible that as quantity is not enough to survive deer. it can be considered as another reason behind the declination. The claim is flawed without such systematic report.
In conclusion, the claim , which is stated here is flawed doe to unwarranted evidence. if the author answer the question stated above and provide more evidence perhaps with more systematic research, there might be possible to fully evaluate the viability.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 395 350
No. of Characters: 1820 1500
No. of Different Words: 157 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.458 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.608 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.483 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 128 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 82 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 59 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 32.917 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 21.589 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.833 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.356 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.639 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.084 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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The author present the claim that the de...
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...ada is the result of the global warming.As they are unable to find food in nearby ...
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...ction in the scope of survival for them.Also this is reported by the local hunters a...
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...ction in the scope of survival for them.Also this is reported by the local hunters a...
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...cal hunters as stated in the arguments. however, The Only reason of declination in the ...
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...actors and not only the global warming. Moreover the report submitted by the local hunte...
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...ght not be verified by the authorities. the claim can not be supported by the stron...
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...o this the deer population is declined. hence the argument might be unjustifiable. ...
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...e the argument might be unjustifiable. Moreover, the are on which arctic deer f...
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...grows in limitation. there might not be a abundant amount of plants or the growth...
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...ndant amount of plants or the growth is slower then is is eat by deer. It is necessary to s...
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... of plants or the growth is slower then is is eat by deer. It is necessary to survey ...
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...It is necessary to survey on the plants also. As deer eat the plants hence it might...
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...lants also. As deer eat the plants hence it might possible that as quantity is no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.6327345309 168% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 55.5748502994 86% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 2260.96107784 82% => OK
No of words: 392.0 441.139720559 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74744897959 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62212228058 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 204.123752495 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.413265306122 0.468620217663 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 705.55239521 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 72.8109097006 57.8364921388 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.619047619 119.503703932 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 23.324526521 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.70786347227 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.25449101796 552% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.67664670659 235% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232625545599 0.218282227539 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708186684699 0.0743258471296 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107425123067 0.0701772020484 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139282094924 0.128457276422 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109163917419 0.0628817314937 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.3799401198 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.3550499002 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.5979740519 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.32208582834 91% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 98.500998004 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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