Government should focus on solving immediate problems of today rather than trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future
The authority should focus on solving present problems as opposed to evaluating upcoming problems in the future. The government should be more practical than futuristic because government is facing enough problems in the present that need to be sorted out before contemplating future problems.
Firstly, being futuristic without noticing problems of the present can lead to neglecting of present problems which in turn can lead to more convoluted problems.When these current problems are ignored , the government is doing noting but causing damage to the lives of the people and further complicating things. When more trouble
is caused, there reaches a point where the government can no longer be futuristic. When these problems get accumulated , it can affect the functioning of the government.
Secondly , some of the major present problems faced by the government can be the root cause for impending problems. What that means is by clearing problems of the present may eradicate some of the future problems.So, the government should be decisive and weigh the consequences of each problem before solving it , this would give a clear picture as to what are the steps to be taken for solving and prevention of such problems.
Thirdly , there is a saying that " yesterday is history , Tommorow is a mystery and Today is a gift, that is why it is called the present". It is impossible to perfectly predict the future , all the government is do is make pressumptions about the future but there is no guarantee what kind of problem can be thrown at the government. Time is just being wasted recklessly by sitting and constantly anticipating future problems,after all the time is killed it might be too late to make decisions regarding the prevailing conditions.
Finally , in order for the government to function smoothly with tranquility there needs to be a change in the mindset of the government and people.Necessary steps or decisions should be taken or made to solve problems faced today rather than upcoming problems in the future.This would result in the growth of the economy , betterment in the lives of the people and development of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, after all, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 351.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23361823362 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01569454359 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478632478632 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.4453341502 60.3974514979 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.0 118.986275619 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.9090909091 23.4991977007 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 5.21951772744 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363366497909 0.243740707755 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153632925663 0.0831039109588 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103854877736 0.0758088955206 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206373558678 0.150359130593 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101073562934 0.0667264976115 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 14.1392134831 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 48.8420337079 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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