Governments should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Scientific research plays an important role in the development of any country. However, we cannot neglect the fact that every good has its bad effect and depends on how we use them. Since humans would use scientific research for their own selfish gain, I would say that the government should place few restrictions on scientific research.
Consider the research in the medical field. The main purpose of a medical drug is to cure the sickness. The medicine would work only when consumed in certain dosages. Now a days, people consume prescription drugs for recreational purposes. Consuming drugs in such a way ultimately leads to side effects. People buy over the counter medicines and sell these drugs illegally which gave rise to the smuggling industry
We know that nuclear energy is one of the main energy sources to generate power because of which we can save the limited non-renewable energy sources. However we cannot forget the countries that use this nuclear energy for war crimes which resulted in world war 1 and world war 2.
In conclusion, I would say that government should place restrictions on scientific research in a way where the research can only be used for the betterment of humanity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
... only when consumed in certain dosages. Now a days, people consume prescription drugs for ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...y when consumed in certain dosages. Now a days, people consume prescription drugs for ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...e limited non-renewable energy sources. However we cannot forget the countries that use...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 19.5258426966 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 58.6224719101 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 2235.4752809 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 202.0 442.535393258 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00495049505 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71198583512 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 215.323595506 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594059405941 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 704.065955056 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.7871914084 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9090909091 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159222750768 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557792938838 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665240859385 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104487023584 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582107276705 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 100.480337079 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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