Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Ideas that turn into reality, results in advancements in humanity. This ultimately leads to people leaving a lasting legacy in the world.
People who turn ideas into reality have thick skin and usually don't get affected by the hate and criticism around them. They have a clear head and are confident about turning their ideas into reality. Getting affected by criticism has ill-effects and affects the mental health of an individual.
People who turn ideas into reality regardless of doubts or criticism have achieved so many milestones. These are the people who leave a lasting legacy. For example, Steve Jobs, turned his ideas into a multi million dollar company called Apple. He had a lot of people who doubted him and criticised his ability to lead a company but he ultimately proved them wrong.
However, criticism also has its advantages. It teaches one to become stronger and deal with hate better. People who don't consider creative criticism, don't see themselves from an outsiders perspective and hence they cannot work on improving themselves.
In conclusion, a person who does not get affected by doubts and criticism are confident enough to turn their ideas into reality and these people ultimately tend to leave a lasting legacy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 19.5258426966 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 12.9106741573 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 2235.4752809 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 204.0 442.535393258 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14705882353 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58107670162 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 215.323595506 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 704.065955056 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3762010242 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7692307692 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196610726561 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082030145666 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063379596401 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122646356083 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542456292049 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 100.480337079 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.