SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville. The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that Corporateville is a superior place to live than Middlesburg, the home of SuperCorp's original headquarters. Moreover, Middlesburg is a predominately urban area and according to an employee survey, SuperCorp has determined that its workers prefer to live in an area that is not urban. Finally, Corporateville has lower taxes than Middlesburg, making it not only a safer place to work but also a cheaper one. Therefore, Supercorp clearly made the best decision.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on the assumptions and what the implications are if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The argument states that SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville because of the recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville. However, this statement is vague as it does not mention the exact time when SuperCorp decided to move its headquarters to Corporateville.
The recent surge in population of Corporateville is very vague as it could be a very small rise in population but Middlesburg could still have a higher population than Corporateville. Hence we cannot conclude that Corporateville is a superior place to live in than Middlesburg.
The argument states that a survey was taken for the SuperCorp employees who preferred Corporateville to Middlesburg which could be far less as compared to the total poopulation of Middlesburg. Majority of the people may prefer living in Middlesburg.
The argument states that Corporateville has lower taxes as compared to Middlesburg however, lower taxes could result in the government not having enough money to maintain Corporateville.
In conclusion SuperCorp may not have made the best decision as they were not specific in their argument.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... higher population than Corporateville. Hence we cannot conclude that Corporateville ...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... to Middlesburg which could be far less as compared to the total poopulation of Mi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.6327345309 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 11.1786427146 9% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 28.8173652695 42% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 55.5748502994 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 2260.96107784 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 174.0 441.139720559 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51724137931 5.12650576532 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 4.56307096286 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47282449526 2.78398813304 125% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 204.123752495 45% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522988505747 0.468620217663 112% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 705.55239521 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59920159681 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 19.7664670659 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8874983338 57.8364921388 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 119.503703932 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 23.324526521 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.70786347227 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41617760968 0.218282227539 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186489073684 0.0743258471296 251% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146879833326 0.0701772020484 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200749921043 0.128457276422 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142869441858 0.0628817314937 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.3799401198 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 48.3550499002 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.197005988 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.5979740519 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 98.500998004 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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