The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries.
The writer contends that conformity almost always leads to the deadening of the individual creativity and energy. I mostly agree with the author's assertion. However, in some cases, accordance encourages imagination rather than collapse it.
First of all, when two persons disagree with the proof of mathematical conundrum, they they " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">are forced to think in a different way inorder to establish their point of view. consequently, the discord catalze inventiveness among them. For example, while I was in a highschool, a problem related to trigonometry created created " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">diagreement of the verification process between us. Then, we we " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">were involved in a race to formulate the convincing proof. As a result, after few days, one of my friend proved it in a very acute method. For another instance, during the University time, a collegue of mine says, the proof provided by the book about a problem is not correct. All collegues were not agreed, later all were started trying to favour their point right. As a result, all were busy with proving it. Finally, there were so many methods created.
Secondly, when we usually engages in a political debate, disagreement often triggers us to think properly in order to show our side is valid. For instance, we often see in an American political debate, one one " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">is usuallly try to say that they they " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">are indeed a best candidate, in order to prove so, they presents various their point of views. consequently, they become creative glaringly. In case of myself, once I used used " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">to be very retiring, I barely engages in a debate, but as time passed, I started engaging in various debates, later I found myself that mine creativity has significantly rosed.
Third of all, this this " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">might not be true in all the situation, sometimes, agreement leads us to more creative . For example, suppose two persons of different fields are having debate, what do you think in this case, in my point in this case, the debate couldn't be fruitful.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Providing Internet access is just as important as other services such as building roads so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost Use specific reasons and examples 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
- Do you agree or disagree Playing computer games is a waste of time children should not be allowed to play them 90
- The data from a survey of high school math and science teachers show that in the district of Sanlee many of these teachers reported assigning daily homework whereas in the district of Marlee most science and math teachers reported assigning homework no mo 50
- Over the past year our late night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news During this time period most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station s coverage of weather a 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...ity and energy. I mostly agree with the authors assertion. However, in some cases, acco...
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Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: they
...th the proof of mathematical conundrum, they they ' style='color: rgb85, 85, 85...
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Line 2, column 201, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ce: pre-wrap;'>are forced to think in a different way inorder to establish their point of vie...
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Line 2, column 261, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consequently
...order to establish their point of view. consequently, the discord catalze inventiveness amon...
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Line 2, column 397, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: created
...hool, a problem related to trigonometry created created ' style='color: rgb85, 85, 85...
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Line 2, column 558, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: we
... verification process between us. Then, we we ' style='color: rgb85, 85, 85...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... were not agreed, later all were started trying to favour their point right. As ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...re started trying to favour their point right. As a result, all were busy with p...
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Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'engage'
Suggestion: engage
...ods created. Secondly, when we usually engages in a political debate, disagreement oft...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s to think properly in order to show our side is valid. For instance, we often se...
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Suggestion: one
...en see in an American political debate, one one ' style='color: rgb85, 85, 85...
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Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: they
...wrap;'>is usuallly try to say that they they ' style='color: rgb85, 85, 85...
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Line 3, column 434, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...white-space: pre-wrap;'>are indeed a best candidate, in order to prove so, t...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'present'
Suggestion: present
...t candidate, in order to prove so, they presents various their point of views. consequen...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consequently
... presents various their point of views. consequently, they become creative glaringly. In cas...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: used
...ve glaringly. In case of myself, once I used used ' style='color: rgb85, 85, 85...
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Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'engage'
Suggestion: engage
...ap;'>to be very retiring, I barely engages in a debate, but as time passed, I star...
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Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: this
...has significantly rosed. Third of all, this this ' style='color: rgb85, 85, 85...
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Line 4, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n, sometimes, agreement leads us to more creative . For example, suppose two p...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...es, agreement leads us to more creative . For example, suppose two persons of ...
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Line 4, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eads us to more creative . For example, suppose two persons of different field...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o more creative . For example, suppose two persons of different fields are hav...
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Suggestion:
...uppose two persons of different fields are having debate, what do you think in...
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... persons of different fields are having debate, what do you think in this case, ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...e, in my point in this case, the debate couldnt be fruitful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, while, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2190.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 388.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64432989691 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.87351652798 2.79657885939 139% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528350515464 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.5186636479 60.3974514979 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.666666667 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72222222222 5.21951772744 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0348218652371 0.243740707755 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0161395864289 0.0831039109588 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0192191156982 0.0758088955206 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.027213020592 0.150359130593 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0064623472466 0.0667264976115 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.1639044944 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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