Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position,

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Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

agree
a person's self worth is the most precious thing he has. he should seee himself as an self accomplished person

will to prove oneself, will has the power to change anything, to inculcate anything, to adopt in any situation

stressed situations, demanding situations shows us the real personality of a person, big and risky decisions are made in stressed situations

the situation demanding success will turn a responsble and sensible person to turn out as a leader, to help his groups,
friends,team to achieve the goal

disagree
people are born leaders, false, anyone can cultivate leadership skills if he gets proper environment and more than anyting, if he has a desire to prove himself

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Agree
agree a persons self worth is the most preci...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
agree a persons self worth is the most precious thing h...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 57, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...orth is the most precious thing he has. he should seee himself as an self accompli...
^^
Line 2, column 83, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...thing he has. he should seee himself as an self accomplished person will to pro...
^^
Line 4, column 29, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...d person will to prove oneself, will has the power to change anything, to inculc...
^^^
Line 9, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , team
...s a leader, to help his groups, friends,team to achieve the goal disagree people...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 19.5258426966 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.3162921348 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 33.0505617978 27% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 58.6224719101 20% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 599.0 2235.4752809 27% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 115.0 442.535393258 26% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20869565217 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.27472217062 4.55969084622 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84069801587 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 215.323595506 36% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678260869565 0.4932671777 138% => OK
syllable_count: 177.3 704.065955056 25% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 20.2370786517 10% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 23.0359550562 247% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 289.5 60.3974514979 479% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 299.5 118.986275619 252% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.5 23.4991977007 245% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0351994549203 0.243740707755 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0295277098329 0.0831039109588 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00118514434171 0.0758088955206 2% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0102011476096 0.150359130593 7% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160922546359 0.0667264976115 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.9 14.1392134831 226% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.08 48.8420337079 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.3 12.1743820225 200% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.38706741573 123% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 100.480337079 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 11.8971910112 223% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 11.2143820225 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 25.0 11.7820224719 212% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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