The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Reasearches are one of the most important part of the country inorder develop,compete with the other countries etc.Howerver it is impossible for a research to be continued without the support of the government. also,it is an important factor for the government to pre check the research and its consequences upon doing it in many ways are to be considererd.well,in my opinion it is required for the government to fund the research but sequentially montinoring the scientists.
Firstly,there should exist a trust for the government on the scientist team that are doing the research so that teh government can help the researchers interms of funds and other internal supports required.also there wont exist a particular outcome for each and every research,the final outcome has many chances that might be as expected,or more than excpected or sometimes worse than expected.there sholuld exist some officicals inorder to keep monitoting the research and its upcoming goals etc
Secondly,the government must be able to stop the research in the initial stages of its bad consequences so that it wouldnt be threat to the society.for instance,let us consider a scientist who works his work individually by using the equipment that is provided by the government for the official research.assume that he is trying to research for a medicine that is not yet invented inorder to get a gratituity by the government and this particular medicine is to be tested and failed as that the man on whom the scientist has tested on becomes some kind of zombie who can infect others.now.these types of cases would be threat to the society and the government should take care of such cases not to happen.
According to my opinion,the government has to start a technique in such a way that it has to fund the scientific research not all at once but by gradually checking its outcomes throughout theresearch so that thier wont be any bad consequences.
there must exist a complete thesis of the research provied by the scientists to the government by confirming that there wouldnt be any consequences for the researcha nd it must be assured to be safe and then the government has to start the funding for the research.
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college 67
- a nation should require all its students to study a common curriculum 50
- should the government check on the scientific researches before funding without knowing the consequences 75
- The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning f 16
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , compete
...tant part of the country inorder develop,compete with the other countries etc.Howerver i...
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Suggestion: Howerver
...op,compete with the other countries etc.Howerver it is impossible for a research to be c...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...tries etc.Howerver it is impossible for a research to be continued without the support of ...
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Suggestion: Also
... without the support of the government. also,it is an important factor for the gover...
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Suggestion: , it
...hout the support of the government. also,it is an important factor for the governme...
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... in many ways are to be considererd.well,in my opinion it is required for the gover...
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...montinoring the scientists. Firstly,there should exist a trust for the government...
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Suggestion: , the
...ular outcome for each and every research,the final outcome has many chances that mig...
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Suggestion: , or
...s many chances that might be as expected,or more than excpected or sometimes worse ...
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Suggestion: , the
...its upcoming goals etc Secondly,the government must be able to stop the res...
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Suggestion: wouldn't
...ages of its bad consequences so that it wouldnt be threat to the society.for instance,l...
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Suggestion: There
...ier wont be any bad consequences. there must exist a complete thesis of the res...
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Suggestion: wouldn't
...the government by confirming that there wouldnt be any consequences for the researcha n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, for instance, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06575342466 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24269463458 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479452054795 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 73.0 23.0359550562 317% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 387.114143374 60.3974514979 641% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 369.8 118.986275619 311% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 73.0 23.4991977007 311% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.6 5.21951772744 414% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00933379902423 0.243740707755 4% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00861883711729 0.0831039109588 10% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0147781662063 0.0758088955206 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00583450068022 0.150359130593 4% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00830492886631 0.0667264976115 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.9 14.1392134831 275% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.84 48.8420337079 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 12.1743820225 251% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.31 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.38706741573 128% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 31.2 11.2143820225 278% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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