A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
Students of the nation hold a great impact to the future of the country.the countrys economic growth,literacy rates,researches,politics everything depends on the students.
it is the governments job to take care of the uniformity of the students until they have the maturity of taking thier own courses in thier individual fields of study.In my opinion,there must exist an uniform circullum acroos the country to all students until thier college.
Firstly,it is very important for the students make used of equality by not letting them apart based on the fee they pay. all the students of the nation should have a common currciulum designed by the government so that their wont be any differences among all the states of the nation for instance if their are private institutons running based on the amount they charge the student they may have to design thier own syllabus inorder to prove thier students the best of all.nevertheless,it is not possoble to the government to make the common national curriculum throughout the study as the students keep on dividing based on thier interests and the job opportunities that are trending in that particular decade. so thier must exist a common curricuum atleast until they leave the high school.
Secondly,the government must be able to make the curriculum which consists of courses in such a way that it has to cover the basics of each and every type of specilization the students arev going to choose in the future.for instance,assume the courses in college like computer engineering,economics,chemical engineering,aerospace engineering,bo technology and also other language based courses such as french,spanish etc.what happens if the common curriculum has only the courses of english,maths and science.in that case it might be impossible to a student to build an interest in the economics.despite,the country should be able to maintain an uniformity even in the chapters in the subjects.
based on the current situations of the students it is very important to maintain a common national curriculum to the students among the nation.and ofcourse this should be based on few conditions such as maintaing the courses that must be able to cover each and every side of job opportunities.so i mostly agree with the fact that the students of a nation to have common curriculum until they enter the college to pursue thier individual courses and degrees.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , literacy
...the country.the countrys economic growth,literacy rates,researches,politics everything de...
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Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , researches
... countrys economic growth,literacy rates,researches,politics everything depends on the stud...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...cs everything depends on the students. it is the governments job to take care of ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ses in thier individual fields of study.In my opinion,there must exist an uniform ...
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Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...individual fields of study.In my opinion,there must exist an uniform circullum acroos ...
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Line 2, column 197, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...of study.In my opinion,there must exist an uniform circullum acroos the country to...
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Line 4, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...students until thier college. Firstly,it is very important for the students make...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: All
...g them apart based on the fee they pay. all the students of the nation should have ...
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Line 4, column 301, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...he states of the nation for instance if their are private institutons running based o...
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Line 4, column 486, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...er students the best of all.nevertheless,it is not possoble to the government to ma...
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Line 4, column 713, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...are trending in that particular decade. so thier must exist a common curricuum atl...
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Line 6, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... they leave the high school. Secondly,the government must be able to make the cur...
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Line 6, column 233, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , assume
...ing to choose in the future.for instance,assume the courses in college like computer en...
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Line 6, column 289, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , economics
...ses in college like computer engineering,economics,chemical engineering,aerospace engineer...
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Line 6, column 320, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , aerospace
...gineering,economics,chemical engineering,aerospace engineering,bo technology and also othe...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 342, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , bo
...emical engineering,aerospace engineering,bo technology and also other language base...
^^^
Line 6, column 409, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , spanish
...er language based courses such as french,spanish etc.what happens if the common curricul...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 491, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , maths
...rriculum has only the courses of english,maths and science.in that case it might be im...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 604, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ild an interest in the economics.despite,the country should be able to maintain an u...
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Line 6, column 644, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...,the country should be able to maintain an uniformity even in the chapters in the ...
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Line 6, column 696, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y even in the chapters in the subjects. based on the current situations of the s...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Based
...n in the chapters in the subjects. based on the current situations of the studen...
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Line 8, column 306, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...y side of job opportunities.so i mostly agree with the fact that the students of a nation to have common...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, of course, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 386.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23316062176 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58863933883 2.79657885939 128% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453367875648 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.0 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 23.0359550562 239% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 223.78287582 60.3974514979 371% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 288.571428571 118.986275619 243% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.1428571429 23.4991977007 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.2857142857 5.21951772744 331% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345165591976 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160039249772 0.0831039109588 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101180905701 0.0758088955206 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188076700807 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108762593553 0.0667264976115 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.8 14.1392134831 218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.65 48.8420337079 32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 12.1743820225 203% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.0 11.2143820225 214% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , literacy
...the country.the countrys economic growth,literacy rates,researches,politics everything de...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , researches
... countrys economic growth,literacy rates,researches,politics everything depends on the stud...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...cs everything depends on the students. it is the governments job to take care of ...
^^
Line 2, column 166, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ses in thier individual fields of study.In my opinion,there must exist an uniform ...
^^
Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...individual fields of study.In my opinion,there must exist an uniform circullum acroos ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 197, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...of study.In my opinion,there must exist an uniform circullum acroos the country to...
^^
Line 4, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...students until thier college. Firstly,it is very important for the students make...
^^^
Line 4, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: All
...g them apart based on the fee they pay. all the students of the nation should have ...
^^^
Line 4, column 301, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...he states of the nation for instance if their are private institutons running based o...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 486, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...er students the best of all.nevertheless,it is not possoble to the government to ma...
^^^
Line 4, column 713, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...are trending in that particular decade. so thier must exist a common curricuum atl...
^^
Line 6, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... they leave the high school. Secondly,the government must be able to make the cur...
^^^^
Line 6, column 233, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , assume
...ing to choose in the future.for instance,assume the courses in college like computer en...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 289, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , economics
...ses in college like computer engineering,economics,chemical engineering,aerospace engineer...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 320, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , aerospace
...gineering,economics,chemical engineering,aerospace engineering,bo technology and also othe...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 342, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , bo
...emical engineering,aerospace engineering,bo technology and also other language base...
^^^
Line 6, column 409, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , spanish
...er language based courses such as french,spanish etc.what happens if the common curricul...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 491, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , maths
...rriculum has only the courses of english,maths and science.in that case it might be im...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 604, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ild an interest in the economics.despite,the country should be able to maintain an u...
^^^^
Line 6, column 644, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...,the country should be able to maintain an uniformity even in the chapters in the ...
^^
Line 6, column 696, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y even in the chapters in the subjects. based on the current situations of the s...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Based
...n in the chapters in the subjects. based on the current situations of the studen...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 306, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...y side of job opportunities.so i mostly agree with the fact that the students of a nation to have common...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, of course, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 386.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23316062176 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58863933883 2.79657885939 128% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453367875648 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.0 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 23.0359550562 239% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 223.78287582 60.3974514979 371% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 288.571428571 118.986275619 243% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.1428571429 23.4991977007 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.2857142857 5.21951772744 331% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345165591976 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160039249772 0.0831039109588 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101180905701 0.0758088955206 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188076700807 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108762593553 0.0667264976115 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.8 14.1392134831 218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.65 48.8420337079 32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 12.1743820225 203% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.0 11.2143820225 214% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.