The main benefit of the study of history is to dispel the illusion that people living now are significantly different from people who lived in earlier times.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
History had a diverse impact on the lives of people till date and will have the same impact forever.It created a pathway between the timelines and the events so that people can be connected with the evolution and automation of the world and lives .it had always taught us many things .In my opinion , I strongly disagree with the fact that main benefit of the study of history is to dispel the illusion that people living now are different from the people who lived in earlier times .
The following three points will put some more light on it .
Firstly, many historical events had taught people the way to live their lives in a better and peacefull way .for instance ,the wars that occurred in the past had proved that it’s very important for people to solve problems and come out with peaceful solutions. In other way , wars have always created nuisance and bought major damage to the economy and lives .keeping this in view ,people started resolving issues in a peaceful way, by communicating and finding a good and feasible solution rather than going for wars.
The times where people needed a democratic and sovereign rule to take proper decisions and have a leading team for problem solving is probably the second point out.for instance ,to take a decision and come to a single decision , because of mixture of opinions and difference of point of views in the past events of history , people decided to appoint a governing body to solve all these issues.It Made the lives of people more better and less chaotic.
History had been a reason to take the research of scientist further and continue it which was the major reason for automation.for instance ,Thomas Alva editions research and development of electric bulb lead other scientist to build electrical appliances which transformed the way humans lived. It made human lives much easier and comfortable leading to more automation and betterment of society .
Of course , the main benefit of study of history was to remove the illusion that people living now are different from people who lived earlier , however , it was very important for people to learn history to show how lives of people change with time .History reveals how the lives of people changed significantly .It is the leaving proof of how people started adapting to the changes that occurred as an influence of the past historical events.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, so, as to, for instance, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 401.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91770573566 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49582385136 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501246882793 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 23.0359550562 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.607768431 60.3974514979 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 246.5 118.986275619 207% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.125 23.4991977007 213% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.875 5.21951772744 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 7.80617977528 423% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374894201365 0.243740707755 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150166522644 0.0831039109588 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141397202106 0.0758088955206 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182523930668 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149612848206 0.0667264976115 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.8 14.1392134831 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.19 48.8420337079 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 12.1743820225 177% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.8971910112 231% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 11.2143820225 196% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.7820224719 187% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.