Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
It is often argued that considerable lot of people have a common belief at that one should just accept a adverse situation in life, like financial crisis. However, another lot of people thinks that one must make an effort to better such crisis. This essay will throw a light on both of these opinion .
On the one hand, people belief a lot on their fate. There is a feeling among them that their destiny is pre-decided and no effort of their own could subside their situation: They generally do not lead a life with optimistic approach . Such people accept that nothing could change in their life and they just have to go with the flow. They are mostly such people who believes in astrology and other things like palm - reading .
On the other hand, a whole lot of people belives in time diligence and determination .They lead a life with a surge of possitivity and have faith that their efforts could change bad situations and allievate it . They think that one should never settle for less and must do everything possible to make their life better . Such people have an opinion that a goal is vital to drive career towards success.
In my opinion, it support the later belief of people and truly accept that nothing is impossible. Though, it is true that there are certain aspects of life which could not be altered, however, an effort to better the situation, never goes in vain. Fate is how you make it and it is extremely wrong belief to accept what others may suggest looking at your palm, even a paralysed person with no hand could lead a successful life.
In a nutshell, even though life is full of adversities and sometimes we may get a rush of feeling to give -up and accept our fate, but life is never same each day and time diligence always leads to success and betterment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56386292835 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34808623434 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510903426791 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.805773152 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.642857143 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204165500589 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848063011724 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498456763348 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121127184138 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590835231002 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.