As more and more people rely on technology the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely decline | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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As more and more people rely on technology, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely decline.

Nowadays, technology has become an integral part of human’s life; hence, tendency to depend on it is inclining day by day. Technology has many benefits as well as drawbacks but excess of anything is always harmful.
The things which was were once impossible in the past is are today conceivable due to technology. For an instance, genetic engineering makes it possible for us to prepare vaccines which fight with lethal diseases like polio that is miracle come true in human life. Secondly, the main factor which saves major amount of time in our daily life is automation. Machines are the gift from technology which makes every task to be performed with ease and comfort . Data storage and analytics in devices eliminates tons of calculations and lots of paperwork makes it easy to achieve.
In contrast, it has its own downsides which completely depend on its use. More use of anything is defined as addiction which has its own consequences. In the current era, social media addiction is one of the major disadvantages of technology which leads many health issues including insomnia, mental health disorders specially for youngsters. Humans’ dependency on technology is increasing with time. For an example, currently people use application to set an alarm even for drinking water which states that survival without it is impossible and this type of reliability on anything is not acceptable.
In summary, one can appreciate the positive sides of technology without ignoring the negatives aspects of it. A proper approach to use it is always beneficial.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, in contrast, in fact, in summary, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 254.0 442.535393258 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15748031496 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87936619964 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625984251969 0.4932671777 127% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7656596703 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5714285714 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138893751081 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450931863233 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398305276029 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759667829979 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366435759272 0.0667264976115 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Essay evaluations by e-grader

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, in contrast, in fact, in summary, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this: