Some people prefer to buy local products while others prefer international products. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the advancement in technology, all industries are booming. Technology has increased the production of both local brands and international brands. Also, both local and international brands have got more platforms for marketing of their goods. With the variety of options available, some people choose to buy local products whereas others prefer to purchase international products. I completely agree with this statement.
At present, the market is flooded with all sorts of strategies to sell goods. Both local and overseas products are competing against each other. Each product has so many varieties of options that people have to now add other factors while purchasing. The products vary in price, color, quality, and much more. Also, with various online platforms, it has become extremely convenient to purchase goods from any part of the world.
Adding to the above, most members of every household are tech-savvy. They can easily compare the product quality of both local and international brands and choose the best. Some feel that goods produced locally helps the economy of the country but also provide means to the local people a livelihood. However, some feel that the quality of international brands is more. Also, it acts as a status symbol to people and increases their net worth. Often people try to copy celebrities and therefore, purchase stuff from different countries which are sold under various famous labels. Thus, prefer to shop for a named international brand.
In conclusion, I understand that with an increase in social media and the use of technology, awareness of products is more and thereby everyone gets to buy from whichever place they may choose.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24814814815 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74551386172 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2665159342 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7222222222 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38888888889 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324691634963 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999017815126 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948282201393 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191426623456 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814996113224 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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