A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The statement linking the national curriculum with the students' educational requirements plays on the need for an equal educational opportunity. Students are the country's bright future, which implies that affirmative and progressive measures shall be taken for their good. But this argument lacks plenty of premises that need to be catered upon.
The subjects offered for the students might be really amazing but does that mean that students are passionate about the same? Chris may like geography but George may not. Additionally, the major part of the student's life is governed by the ethics taught in schools. The career of the student should be prioritized.
Additionally, no one can guarantee if the curriculum is going to bring a positive change in the child's development or not. 12 years of study at Manila University of Psychology highlights the need of throwing light upon the child's mindset and the greater good while designing school the curriculum.
With variety comes creativity, and that should at no cost be overshadowed by the power of government. The children not only befriend their classmates but also their vicinity colleagues. This can surely help the students communicate with each other and share new ideas, unlike the monotonous ones. Different boards like CBSE, ICSE, and State Board of education guarantees this.
However, basic education is the right of every citizen, and poverty can make a dramatic change in the scenario. A basic curriculum might at least guarantee the fact that he is educated till high school. Moreover, the support provided by the faculties matters more too. It would be easier for the faculty recruitment process as the curriculum would be the same.
Therefore, The premises need to be looked upon by the decision-makers and take the third perspective of the end-users, that is the students into consideration. Adoption of the decision is easier but the consequences must be well calculated upon.
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position 58
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, third, well, while, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 313.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24600638978 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89513285378 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591054313099 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.984272067 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.4210526316 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4736842105 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14063746728 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403051419652 0.0831039109588 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439190650232 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692773723375 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443071069712 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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