a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
Education is the most integral part of every human's life. Education serves as the basic building block of a person's character. It gives purpose to ones life. Thus the journey of acquiring knowledge must be embarked upon with utmost care. A mother of every child is his/her first teacher. Everyone wants to give their child the best of eduation so they turn out to be the Narendra Modi of their country. All children have the right to education in India. Thus education being such an intregal part of our life; we are here to discuss on the cirriculum that our education system follows. I strongly agree with the topic which states that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Majority of a student's growth is based on his primary and high school education. A difference in curriculum would result in a much lesser growth of the students with a lower level of education. Similarity in curriculum would be the first massive step towards equality of all. This is the first advantage.
During the later years of a student's education, they seek admission in college and universities. If there a difference in the level and quality of education, how can we judge the weightage of their marks?It would be really unfair to a student from a much higher level curriculum to lose on admission because of the difference in level of curriculum . Thus we need a common ground which helps us evaluate the marks of these students. This would be the second advantage.
Nowdays there has been atrend of parents not buying a permanent house and rather staying in houses of rent which costs 1% an annum rather as compared to buying a permanent house. Thus if there is a transfer of job or if a family wants to shift to another city or town it wouldnt affect the childs education progess as the country would be having a same national curriculum. So the child can easily get used to new city and it will like water flowing through a river for him.
A common national curriculum would allow capable and intectually similar students even from the rural areas to seek admission in the urban modern colleges and compete with students from all sections of the society. There have been previous instances where a rural boy with a weaker curriculum got admission in a city college, but he couldn't manage the further level of education as his studies in the former years was of a much lower level.
Thus in this way i support the given topic. I hope someday this rule is implemented all over India as it very beneficial and helps in the CORRECT overall development of every child.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, so, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2184.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 461.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73752711497 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53090194698 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518438177874 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 695.7 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.060829924 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2083333333 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.95833333333 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276484598408 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661998215532 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138219813777 0.0758088955206 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118924045132 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726965459737 0.0667264976115 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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