In order to obtain knowledge about self mind we have to discard familiarity
To say that, in order to obtain knowledge about self or inner mind we have to discard the familiarity is the best thing, and I do some what agree with the following statement.
We live in the complicated world, where everything has changed a lot. A person can never learn, unless they get out of their comfort zone, and do something with their life. The world isn't the same place as it used to be few hundred years ago, there are different things erected and different things build through out the world and to get the knowledge about those things we do have to reject the familiar things. A guitarist can never learn to play good music, when he or she is not better connected with this world.
A person is prohibited to learn anything about himself- unless he goes beyond the familiarity or same things. Einstein- a greatest physicist of 20th century, learned about different things from diving in the unknown and went to erect new ideas when he went far from familiarity and stepped into a way to find out the self knowledge. His ideas were novice and he went on to be the architect of the modern physics. As, Einstein we do have many examples who went through different experiences rejecting unfamiliarity and gaining the self knowledge- which is much esteemed in this modern world.
But there are some few exceptions, here in order to get out of the circle of familiarity, you do have to learn different familiar things, to become a great painter first step is you do have to learn firstly about the paintings or the familiar things. So a complete rejection of familiarity is a bad thing and will not be completely helpful for the beginners.
So, a person has to reject familiarity in order to dive down to the best, because following a line might deter us to be the best and to gain self knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: SOME_WHAT_JJ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somewhat' (=slightly)?
Suggestion: somewhat
...familiarity is the best thing, and I do some what agree with the following statement. We...
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Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...do something with their life. The world isnt the same place as it used to be few hun...
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Line 2, column 305, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...ings erected and different things build through out the world and to get the knowledge abou...
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Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...e familiarity or same things. Einstein- a greatest physicist of 20th century, lea...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is much esteemed in this modern world. But there are some few exceptions, here ...
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Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: DESCEND_DOWN[1]
Message: This phrase might be redundant. Use simply 'dive'.
Suggestion: dive
...n has to reject familiarity in order to dive down to the best, because following a line m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 324.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58024691358 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55313895402 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512345679012 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6410202201 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335623571701 0.243740707755 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119590925856 0.0831039109588 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141125933164 0.0758088955206 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221912099226 0.150359130593 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163324100069 0.0667264976115 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 48.8420337079 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 100.480337079 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.